Many teachers assign homework to students every day.

[Ninika]

Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I want to start my essay by the words- knowledge is treasure. I know that during all our conscious life we have to study if we want to reach our purposes. I think that teachers are link between us and knowledge. And we need teachers’ help to obtain as much knowledge as possible.
Every teacher is different and has his/her own style of teaching. Someone prefers to give less homework but provide students with all necessary information at a lecture. And conversely there are some kinds of teachers who think that nothing can be done without homework.
I agree with the opinion that homework is obligatory because most students are lazy and sometimes don’t work individually and don’t study lessons if they are not under compulsion. But on the other hand I think teachers should take into account that students are young and need more free time for amusements. For instance in some universities students are given lots of homework simultaneously in several subjects and from my point of view students are unable to do everything with a demanded quality. Furthermore I know when students are so loaded they become nervous, tired and lose striving to study more diligently.
In conclusion my opinion towards that question is that daily homework in necessary for students not to fall out of the chosen path. Homework is obligatory to maintain students’ desire to study, to keep them in form and not to weaken their intelligence.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from a social studies class

[Kitosdad]

Many teachers assign homework to students every day. Do you think that daily homework is necessary for students? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I want to start my essay by WITH the words- knowledge is treasure. I know that during all OF our conscious life we have to study if we want to reach our /purposes/GOAL.
I think that teachers are THE link between us/OURSELVES /and knowledge(,) and we need teachers’ help to obtain as much knowledge as possible.
Every teacher is different and has his/her own style of teaching. Some TEACHERS prefer to give less homework(,) but THEY provide students with all necessary information DURING THE lecture(,) and conversely there are some kinds of teachers who think that nothing can be done without homework.
I agree with the opinion that homework SHOULD BE obligatory(,) because most students are lazy and sometimes DO NOT work individually and DO NOT study lessons if they are not under compulsion FORCED TO DO SO. But o On the other hand I think teachers should take into account that students are young and need more free time for amusements. For instance in some universities students are given lots of homework simultaneously in several subjects(,) and from my point of view students are unable to do everything /with a demanded quality/TO THE STANDARD EXPECTED/. Furthermore I know when students are so loaded WITH WORK they become nervous, tired and lose THE ABILITY to study more diligently.

In conclusion, my opinion towards that question is that daily homework in necessary for students not to stray from the chosen path. Homework is obligatory to maintain students’ desire to study, to keep them in form and not to weaken their intelligence.
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Good work Ninika.

Kitos. 8/10
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[Ninika]

Thank you :) i will take into account all your tips.