Coaches are best teachers?

[Abdusselam]

Learning a lesson from a coach is one of the most significant factors for students. In my opinion coaches are best teacers and they improv the knowledge of students in each fields. To understand importance of this, it is necessary to find some answers for this questions. Why do all of students want to receive some lessons from a coach and how do coaches expand their knowledges? I will try to give some specific details and examples to explain these questions in the following paragraph.

To begin with, coaches teach their students how to study. For example, they prepare a time table for their students and give their students lessons about subject which they do not know enough. Second, coaches provides some opportunities for their students. For instance, only one student have a chance, that is giving some lessons from a coach. That is, In the school a lot of student learn from a teacher, wheras a coach teach only one student in a certain time. Because of that, all of student want to learn some lessons from tutors. Likewise, thanks to this type of education coaches can expand knowledge of their students in each fields. Third, a student who gives education from a coach become more successful than a school student. For example, he or she can ask some questions to him or her teacher easily and this provides them a better education chance. On the other hand, coaches teach their students how they need to study for their exams and what kind of knowledge is important for them.

As a result, all of these conculision show that all of student want to recieve some lessons from coaches and coaches improve their knowledge in each fiels. In summaray, all of above situations show that coaches is best teachers and giving education from them is important for all of students.

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[Kitosdad]

Learning a lesson from a coach is one of the most significant factors for students. In my opinion coaches are best teacers and they improvE the knowledge of students in EVERY field. To understand THE importance of this it is necessary to find some answers TO THESE questions. Why do all of students want to receive some lessons from a coach and how do coaches expand their knowledge? I will try to give some specific details and examples to explain these questions in the following paragraph.

To begin with, coaches teach their students how to study. For example, they prepare a time table for their students and give their students lessons about subjectS which they do not know enough.

Second, coaches provide some opportunities for their students. For instance, only one student HAS a chance, that is IN TAKING some lessons from a coach. That is, in the school a lot of studentS learn from a teacher, wherEHas a coach teachES only one student in a certain time. Because of that, all of THE studentS want to learn some lessons from tutors. Likewise, thanks to this type of education coaches can expand THE knowledge of their students in each field.

Third, a student who RECEIVES education from a coach becomeS more successful than a school student. For example, he or she can ask some questions OF him or her teacher easily(,) and this provides them a better education. On the other hand, coaches teach their students how they need to study for their exams and what kind of knowledge is important for them.

As a result, all of these CONCLUSIONS show that all of THE studentS want to recEIve some lessons from coaches(,) and coaches improve their knowledge in each fielD. In summary, all of above situations show that coaches ARE THE best teachers and RECEIVING education from them is important for all of students.
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Quite a decent essay Abdusselam, but you must increase your vocabulary. Your lack of this is stifling your work.

Kitos. 7.5/10
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