What is the most important national holiday in your country?

[Mona1]

What is the most important national holiday in your country?

In fact, there are several national holiday in my country but the most important one is the national day holiday, because in this day everyone in the country celebrates and we share the congratulations and we set up a big party in every region in my country. I will mention below what we do in this important day.

First of all, in my country we consider the national day as a big and significant event. Therefore, we prepare every thing before it come. For instance, we put the big screens Plaza in the streets to view the history of our country and the phases which it went through from fight betweet the liberator of KSA with his enemy until the liberation day. Moreover, we put the flag of my country in our cars, homes, draw it on our faces. simply, this is irresistible day.

Secondly, after we did all actions which I mentioned above in the first day, we prepare for the second day, actually, the second day is very amazing and cuddly, because we shall go to a big celebration in the country, there are important characters who attend this important event. In this carnival we will dance and they show us somethings concerning our old generations, they tell us about our old history and they explain for us how the first king of KSA king Abdul Aziz united the kingdom.

Third, because there are just three day to celebrate, so, in the third day we will swap the visitations and we present the national gifts from children to adults and every body. Otherwise, in these three days nobody calms down.

To sum up, all what I mentioned above make us look forward the national day year after year because it is annually, in the normal days we miss for national day because this day is important for every person in my country.

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[Mona1]

how are you Kitos?
please my dear, can check my essay?

[Kitosdad]

What is the most important national holiday in your country?

There are in fact several national holidays in my country(,) but the most important one is the National Day holiday, because ON this day everyone in the country celebrates(,) and we share the congratulations and we set up a big party in every region in my country. I will mention below what we do ON this important day.

First of all, in my country we consider the National Day as a big and significant event. Therefore, we prepare (everything) before it /come/ARRIVES/. For instance, we put the big screens PlazMa in the streets to view the history of our country and the phases which it went through(,) from THE FIGHT betweeN the liberatorS of KSA with his enemy(,) until the Liberation Day. Moreover, we put the flag of my country in our cars, homes, draw it on our faces. simply, this is AN irresistible/WONDROUS day.

Secondly, after we HAVE DONE all OF THE actions which I HAVE mentioned above in the first day, we prepare for the second day(.) Actually, the second day is very amazing and cuddly, because we shall go to a big celebration in the country(.) There are important characters who attend this important event. In this carnival we will dance and they show us some things concerning our old generations, they tell us about our old history and they explain for TO us how the first king of KSA King Abdul Aziz united the kingdom.

Third, because there are just three day to celebrate, so, ON the third day we will swap the visitations and we present the national gifts from children to adults and (everybody). Otherwise, in these three days nobody calms down.

To sum up, all what I mentioned above makeS us look forward TO the National Day year after year(,) because it is CELEBRATED annually(,) In the normal days we miss for National Day because this day is important for every person in my country.
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Good evening Mona. This is your best essay yet. You seem to improve each time you write. Keep up the good work.

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[Mona1]

Thank you very much Kitis I do not know how I can behavior without you support
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