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#1 (permalink) Thu Jun 17, 2010 22:54 pm What was the best book you have ever read? |
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I appreciate every comment on my writing. Thanks in advance
Sorry, I haven't read any book that I can remember its story now. Although, I had to write something.Hence,I decided to write about a dummy book with this dummy name,"A dummy book about UFO's". the book that I usually study are related to my major. Nevertheless, I am used to studying lots of articles on the internet about diverse subjects. So , I apologize in advance if things which I will write doesn't make a lot of sense and might be boring for you. The best book I have ever read was about UFOs. The name of book is "A dummy book about UFOs" which has written by an anonymous author.The book has discussed the possibility of the existence of these strange objects. . UFOs (Unidentified Flying Objects) are objects that some people claim that they have seen them in the sky or rarely on the ground. Everyone describes what he has seen in a different way. According to this book, the result of a research has shown that people's description of UFO's in each era, is matched with the appearance of these objects in movies that has been made in that era. Some believe that with claiming to sight UFO's, some people mean to make money and to gain reputation . However, some people confirm the existence of UFOs. One of the people who strongly advocates this idea is a Japaneses man who has seen a flying object in Nagasaki. He claims, he had sighted a flying object which was thrown down something like a bomb at city. Interestingly, the bomb was so much powerful than bombs that human had made. Nevertheless, nobody believed him because we have never had such as this event in human history. I love this book very much because sometimes I think that the writer's ideas is similar to my ideas.I suggest everyone reading this book, because you can learn about lots of things apart from UFOs. For example, I learnt how to make up a story when I don't have any story to tell.
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#2 (permalink) Fri Jun 18, 2010 0:12 am What was the best book you have ever read? |
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Hello.. If you really DID write this ,then for me you have done great.. Generally,I think it's good but I think there are some tiny mistakes , if you want me to tell you about ,I prefer some one else who really good at English such as Teacher,expert or maybe Torsten by himself. I'm not that good at English to rate on judge on you ,well done. Practice more and more and more ,you are doing well. Good luck. |
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#3 (permalink) Fri Jun 18, 2010 0:19 am What was the best book you have ever read? |
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Thank you very much for your reply _________________ If you need help, on a windy night, be sure to leave a candle burning so a friend can see the light. |
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Mohammad64 I'm here quite often ;-)

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#4 (permalink) Fri Jun 18, 2010 5:12 am What was the best book you have ever read? |
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I appreciate every comment on my writing. Thanks in advance
Sorry, I have NOT read any book WHOSE STORY I CAN NOW REMEMBER. I can remember its story now. Although AS I FELT THAT I had to write something.Hence I decided to write about a dummy book with this dummy name,"A dummy book about UFO's". The bookS that I usually study are related to my major. Nevertheless, I am used to studying lots of articles on the Internet about diverse subjects. So , I apologize in advance if things /which I will/THAT I WRITE/ write doesn't DO NOT make a lot of sense and might be boring /for/TO/ you.
The best book I have ever read was about UFOs. The name of book is "A dummy book about UFOs" which has written by an anonymous author.The book has discussed the possibility of the existence of these strange objects. . UFOs (Unidentified Flying Objects) are objects that some people claim that they have seen them in the sky(,) or /rarely/MORE UNUSUALLY/ on the ground. Everyone describes what he has seen in a different way. According to this book, the result of a research has shown that people's description of UFOs in each era, is matched with the appearance of these objects in movies that has HAVE been made in that era. Some believe that with BY claiming to HAVE sightED UFOs, some people /mean/HOPE/to make money and to gain A reputation . However, some people confirm the existence of UFOs. One of the people who strongly advocates this idea is a Japaneses man who has seen a flying object in Nagasaki. He claims, he had sighted a flying object /which was thrown down/THAT HAD DROPPED/ something like a bomb at ON THE city. Interestingly, the bomb was so much MORE powerful than bombs that /human had made/HA D PREVIOUSLY BEEN MADE BY HUMANS/. Nevertheless, nobody believed him because we have never had such AN EVENT as this event in human history. I love this book very much because sometimes I think that the writer's ideas is ARE VERY similar to my ideas. I suggest THAT everyone reading SHOULD READ this book, because you can learn about lots of things apart from UFOs. For example, I learnt how to make up a story when I do NOT REALLY have any story to tell. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Good morning Mohammad. Your story would have been better had you included the appearance of aliens themselves. I too am interested in anything connected with aliens and UFOs.
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