Hi, I would like to ask for check up of my essay. Thanks in advance!

[Zlatina83]

Films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. What have you learned about a country from watching its movies?

Films are made to entertain and educate the people. They are separate in different genres so that way movies can satisfy every taste and wish. Each country is proud with its film history and its present position to the world market. Being universally recognized, movies can brings prosperity to the country of its origin. On one hand that means the auditory likes the producers and on another hand likes the country.
To begin with films can tell us a lot about the culture and people’s values in the concrete country. For example the biggest movie center in USA is Universal Studio. Productions, which came from there, present to the rest of the world all typical characteristic of the American society. For instance people realize that Americans are open minded, funny and hearted nation. They work hard but in exchange they have strong economy and all the people live well. From US productions people learn that America is country with unlimited possibilities.
Secondly, films can tutor people about the geographical location of the countries, or about the official religion there. For instance Chinese movies are totally different in their nature than the American. That is why, because China has different culture and religion.
Thirdly, movies can tell people about the nature in the country where they have been made. The Earth is big and every single continent and country has its climate and nature. Film shouted in Alaska introduces us what is the climate there and how people are living in all year round winter conditions.
In conclusion movies are different in their nature because they have different genre and subject, but mainly because they all come from different countries. Watching movies, people can learn a lot for the country where movies were made.





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[Kitosdad]

Good morning Zlatina and WELCOME to our Forum.
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Films are made to entertain and educate the people. They are separateD inTO different genres so that way movies can satisfy every taste and wish. Each country is proud /with/OF/ its film history and its present position to IN the world market. Being universally recognized, movies can brings prosperity to the country of its THEIR origin. /On one hand that means the auditory likes the producers and on another hand likes the country. ???/
To begin with films can tell us a lot about the culture and people’s values in the concrete country. For example the biggest movie /center/PRODUCER/ in THE USA is ARE THE Universal StudioS. Productions, which cOme from there, present to the rest of the world all typical characteristic of the American society.

For instance(,) people realize that Americans are AN open minded, funny and WARM-hearted nation. They work hard(,) but in exchange they have strong economy and all the people live well. From US FOLM productions people learn that America is A country with THAT OFFERS unlimited possibilities TO EACH INDIVIDUAL.

Secondly, films can tutor people about the geographical location of the countries, or about the official religion there.
For instance Chinese movies are totally different in their nature than the American. That is why, because China has A COMPLETELY different culture and religion.

Thirdly, movies can tell people about the nature in the country where they have been made. The Earth is big and every single continent and country has its climate and nature. Film shouted THAT HAVE BEEN /SHOT/MADE/in Alaska introduce us what is TO the climate there(,) and SHOW how people are ABLE TO livE in all year-round winter conditions.

In conclusion movies are different in their nature because they have different genre and subjectS, but mainly because they all come from different countries. BY watching movies, people can learn a lot ABOUT the country where THE movies were made.
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Quite an interesting first submission Zlatina. Thank you.

Kitos. 7.5/10
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