Although abuse of the system is inevitable, social welfare payments are essential

[Iraqman]

"Although abuse of the system is inevitable, social welfare payments are essential to protect the rights citizens have to a guaranteed minimum income in a democratic society"
Discuss

Due to a sudden increase in the world‘s population, many people have ended up in a miserable financial status. Nonetheless a considerable amounts of money are spoiled by physical sick people who do not make control on their usages of money. Despite A huge number of families worldwide require social incomes to survive.

Regardless what the abuse of anti-social people of money is, authorities must allocate a reasonable income for the inhabitants based on strict rules that punish the opponents. as citizens comprise the main component of the society, they should be considered higher that other society problems.

A handful of adults are facing unbearable pressure from there families, to work and sustain there parents. and when these adults get engages, they unfortunately find no money to expend or buy essential wedding belongings or rather pay bride‘s dowry, for that eventually all these amazing and wonderful moments they have exploited with each other vanished like the smoke in the air.

In addition to the repercussions I have mentioned, we see several families who can not provide their little kids or toddlers with milk or food. A huge number of women have started selling their children as if they are goods or products, many women have abortion for at least twice in their whole life.

children around the world are died every day, where are the social care and incomes going on?

These poor people have the right to obtain their incomes, but they must be monitored as the minority of them might start wasting the money after becoming wealthy persons by spending the assistance money on targeting small children by lying on the innocent children that they will become rich in the future, for example abusing them sexually or managing them to work as whores and gays.

To sum, I completely agree that people what ever they are wealthy or poor must get paid their social incomes, at the same the governments must impose a censorship on them to reduce the offenses.

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture on Modern World History

[Kitosdad]

"Although abuse of the system is inevitable, social welfare payments are essential to protect the rights citizens have to a guaranteed minimum income in a democratic society"
Discuss

Due to a sudden increase in THE world‘s population, of course many people have endED up in a miserable financial status. Nonetheless a considerable amounts of many NUMBERare spoiled by physical sick people who do not make a control OF their usages of money. A huge number of families worldwide require social income to survive.

Regardless what the abuse of anti-social people of money is, authorities must allocate a reasonable income for the inhabitants based on strict rules that punish the opponents. as citizens comprise the main component of the society, they should be considered higher that other society problems.
A handful of adults are facing unbearable pressure from there families, to work and sustain there parents. and when these adults get engages, they unfortunately find no money to expend or buy essential wedding belongings or rather pay bride‘s dowry, eventually all these amazing and wonderful moments they have exploited with each other vanished like the smoke in the air.

In addition of the repercussions I have mentioned, we see several families can not provide their little kids or toddlers with milk or food. A huge number of women have started selling their children as if they are goods or products, many women have abortion for at least twice in their whole life.
children around the world are died every day, where are the social care and incomes going on?

These poor people have the right to obtain their incomes, but they must be monitored as the minority of them might start wasting the money after becoming wealthy persons by spending the assistance money on targeting small children by lying on the innocent children that they will become rich in the future, for example abusing them sexually or managing them to work as whores and gays.

To sum, I completely agree that people what ever they are wealthy or poor must get paid their social incomes, at the same the governments must impose a censorship on them to reduce the offenses.
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IM, this is terrible. Please review it SLOWLY, and try to improve many parts of it.
What has happened for you to go from the great work you submitted earlier?
This seems like the work of another person.
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[Iraqman]

Ok kitos, I am so sorry. I have just reviewed it, I got some mistakes.

Please could you rate it and make a full review on it.

If there are extra mistakes make sure that I do not know them.

[Kitosdad]

Regardless what the abuse of anti-social people of money is, authorities must allocate a reasonable income for the inhabitants based on strict rules that punish the opponents. As c Citizens comprise the main component of the society, THEREFORE they should be considered higher that MORE IMPORTANT THAN other society problems.
A handful of adults are facing unbearable pressure from there THEIR families to work and sustain there THEIR parents(,) and when these adults get engageD, they unfortunately find no money to expend or buy essential wedding belongings PRESENTS or rather pay THE bride‘s dowry(.) BECAUSE OF THAT for that eventually all OF these amazing and wonderful moments they have exploited with each other vanish like the smoke in the air.

In addition to the repercussions I have mentioned, we see several families who can not provide their little kids or toddlers with milk or food. A huge number of women have started selling their children as if they are goods or products(.) Many women have abortionS for at least twice in their whole life.
Children around the world are died DYING every day(.) Where are IS the social care and incomes going TO?

These poor people have the right to obtain their incomes, but they must be monitored as the minority of them might start wasting the money after becoming wealthy persons(,) by spending the assistance money on targeting small children(.) By RElying on the innocent children that they will become rich in the future, for example abusing them sexually or managing them to work as whores and gays.

To sum, I completely agree that people(,) what ever WHETHER they are wealthy or poor(,) must get paid their social incomes(.) At the same the governments must impose a censorship on them to reduce theSE offenCes.
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IM, this is not a political platform where you can expound your opinions. Please refrain from doing so.

Kitos. 7/10
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[Iraqman]

Hi kitos, thank you for your response
Really I am confused, I do not know where is the point that is relevant to the policy or other kind of hurting the feeling of people here.

Please can you clarify the offense?