Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others.

[Iraqman]

Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others.
Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately.

In each field of life, there is difference in people‘s behaviors, their reactions might be diverse according to their ages and their levels of literacy as well as the major cause of this distinct variety among students in schools is due to the way they have been raised up in.

We cannot ignore that nowadays in this corrupted and perverted era, and the wide spread of immorality, many children are bringing up with mess and disorder, and without respected and decent morals which have been disappeared before a few years.

We see a handful of students reacting without any shame, as if they are toddlers, they do not think of every step they take forward or decision they make.
Of course all these unconsidered deportments would cost and affect the student‘s study, I will clarify my point of view as follows:

I think it is completely fair when schools isolate the untidy students from the obedient ones who come to a school in order to get the knowledge and raise their horizons rather than playing and ruin the classes by making harasser sounds and bothering their colleagues.
As the world became competitive much more before the previous century, intelligent and polite students are suffering from the noisy and disorder, and they claim that their concentration on lessons have fallen dramatically, all these are due to not applying the rule of separating them by groups.

To sum up, I totally agree that the law of isolating the students by groups must be applied today before tomorrow, because polite students do not have the faults to suffer more.

TOEFL listening lectures: Which event or development did not strongly influence the history of bread?

[Kitosdad]

In each field of life, there is A NOTICEABLE difference in people‘s behaviors(.)
Their reactions might be diverse according to their ages and their levels of literacy(.) as well as t The major cause of this distinct variety among students in schools is due to the way they have been /raised/BROUGHT up in.

We cannot ignore that nowadays in this IMMORAL, corrupted and perverted era, the wide spread of immorality, many children are /bringing up/RAISED/ withIN mess and disorder, and without respected RESPECTand decent morals which have been disappearING before a few DIMINISHING FOR years.

We see a handful of students reacting without any shame, as if they are toddlers(.) They do not think of every step they take forward or ABOUT THE CONSEQUENCES OF ANY decision they make.
Of course all these unconsidered deportments WILL cost and affect the student‘s studIEs(.) I will clarify my point of view as follows:

I think it is completely fair when schools isolate the untidy UNRULY students from the obedient ones who come to a school in order to get the knowledge and raise their horizons(,) rather than playing and ruinING the classes by making harassING sounds and bothering their colleagues.
As the world becOmeS MORE AND MORE competitive much more before THAN IN the previous century, intelligent and polite students are suffering from the noisE and disorder, and they claim that their concentration IN lessons HAS fallen dramatically(.) All OF these are THIS IS due to not applying the rule of separating them INTO groups.

To sum up, I totally agree that the law of isolating the students INTO groups must be applied today(,) RATHER THAN tomorrow, because polite students do not have the faults NEED to suffer more.
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Write less, concentrate more IM.

Kitos. 7:5/10
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[Nzuahp]

My pleasure to read your work Iragman.

If you are prepareing for an English proficiency exam like the TOEFL IBT, you will have to try to compose an essay of up to 300words or more. This one is just about 266words.

Reading you work after writing will help you to add some relevant information as well as sorting out the irrelevant and grammatical errors.

Just follow the corrections of Kitos kindly and very soon, you will produce excellent essays.
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[Iraqman]

Thank you very much Nzuahp for your tips.

Actually I am planning to take IELTS exam, and in this exam they require me to write at least 250 words, I will write about 270 words no more, because their rules are very strict and if I write much more 250 like 300 I will surely lose marks.

[Nzuahp]

You are welcome my friend.
250words withing 30mins, then you need to always make a good outline for about 5mins before you start writing and about 5mins for reviewing your work.
The key to succeeding in the writing section, is reading and writing as much as you can.

I wish you the best in your preparation.
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