Friends are the most important influence on young adults. Have a nice day!

[Dong Jin]

Our society is an organic structure in that people have a relationship with another person and it is applicable to everywhere. In this sense, I strongly believe that especially friends are the most important influence on young people. Because, most young adults or students have spent their time in the school or place of work with friends.

First of all, as developed modern society, young people have been becoming more busier and faster for improving their knowledge and social skills. As a result, they try to adapt their own position, such as students and workers. Thus, almost all young people naturally accepted peer pressure and affirmative or negative effects from their friends. In my experience, when I was a university student, had played school band. At the same time, I changed about views of music and notions of preferring music, such as the modern rock and heavy metal, by my club members. Also, I continuously prefer enjoying rock music to populated music. Consequently, as this instance, friends can affect on one's personalities and they can change one's characteristics.

Moreover, it is often showed that friends who love to work hardly influence on their friends. What I mean is that well-educated people have a lot of laborious friends. According to various research reports, these announced that childhood or adolescence years are vulnerable amounts of effects from their friends and many researchers have published these papers by today. For example, one of my high school friend was a very deliberated person at his study and work. Accordingly, I tried to imitate his successful features in order to alter my natures. As a result, I earned many positive behaviors and methods of how to control efficiently on my work from him.

In conclusion, as each person has different opinions about friends. However, I firmly believe that friends are the most principal advisor to young adults. Therefore, young people must try to get along with positive friends.

Thank for your review.

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor of Natural History

[Kitosdad]

First of all, as developed modern society HAS developed, young people have been becoming more busY and faster for MORE INTERESTED IN improving their knowledge and social skills. As a result, they try to adapt their own position, such as students and workers. Thus, almost all young people naturally accepted peer pressure and affirmative or negative effects from their friends. In my experience, when I was a university student, I had played IN THE school band. At the same time, I changed MY views of music and notions of preferring music, such as the modern rock and heavy metal, MUCH LOVED by my club members. Also, I continuously prefer enjoying rock music to populated POPULAR music. Consequently, IN this instance, friends can HAVE AN affect on one's personalities and they can change one's characteristics.

Moreover, it is often showed SHOWN that friends who love to work hardly EVER TRY TO influence on their friends. What I mean is that well-educated people have a lot of /laborious/HARD WORKING/ friends. According to various research reports, these announced that OUR childhood or adolescence years are THE PERIODS WHEN WE ARE vulnerable TO amounts of effects from OUR friends and many researchers have published these papers by today.
For example, one of my high school friendS was a very deliberated DEDICATED person at his study and work. Accordingly, I tried to imitate his successful features in order to alter my OWN nature. As a result, I Learned many positive behaviors and methods of how to control efficiently on my work from him.

In conclusion, Each person has different opinions about friends. However, I firmly believe that friends are the most principal advisorS to young adults. Therefore, young people must try to get along with positive friends.

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Nice work Dong Jin. You work consistently well.

Kitos. 810
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