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#1 (permalink) Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:10 am Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all. |
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mr. Kitos, thanks for your help. I've tried to write this topic, which I find quite hard. It should help me to understand whether my English skills really improved or there was a accidental success yesterday.
Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all. Discuss such an event in your life, using specific details to support your response.
Sometimes we cannot evaluate objectively the result of our efforts. When we know our goal and try to achieve it working hard every day, we may feel nervous and think that we cannot do it. But what a great pleasure to enjoy the results of our work! I want to write about such an experience, which took place during my school research.
At school I had to make a scientific research about the speech recognition system so that I could enter the prestigious technical University without passing exams. It was a University program, which provided an opportunity for those children, who were interested in science. I chose my specialty, which was the robotic systems, and begun to work. It was quite hard because I had to learn about such fields of mathematics as artificial intelligence and fuzzy logic. In fact, I did not know anything about it at the beginning of my studies because I was too young.
Furthermore, I had only one year to finish my research, write a big article and make the presentation. I filled very nervous and did not believe at all in my success. Moreover, I had not spare time because of this work, although my classmates enjoyed their lives. It also made me feel that I had done a mistake participating in this program. However, I continued to work.
When the time was nearly finished, I had lots of things to do. My University advisor told that we needed at least a couple of moths to finish it. However, in last two weeks I made a successfully working mathematical model, then wrote the article and made the interesting presentation. My advisor was proud of me, and I was happy to enter the university before graduating from the high school. Furthermore, during this work I learned a lot about mathematics, computers, programming and acoustics.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that each plan should be realized. Even if one thinks that things are going badly, he or she should never give up. Each problem has a solution and my example is only the simplest one.
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Arseni You can meet me at english-test.net

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#2 (permalink) Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:55 am Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all. |
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Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all. Discuss such an event in your life, using specific details to support your response.
Sometimes we cannot evaluate objectively the result of our efforts. When we know our goal and try to achieve it working hard every day, we may feel nervous and think that we cannot do it. But what a great pleasure to enjoy the results of our work! I want to write about such an experience, which took place during my school research.
At school I had to make a scientific research about the speech recognition system so that I could enter the prestigious technical University without passing exams. It was a University program, which provided an opportunity for those children who were interested in science. I chose my speciality, which was the robotic systems, and begAn to work. It was quite /hard/DIFFICULT/ because I had to learn about such fields AS mathematics AND artificial intelligence and fuzzy logic. In fact, I did not know anything about it at the beginning of my studies because I was too young.
Furthermore, I had only one year to finish my research, write a big article and make the presentation. I FELT very nervous and did not believe at all in my success. Moreover, I had LITTLE spare time because of this work, although my classmates enjoyed their lives. It also made me feel that I had MADE a mistake IN participating in this program. However, I continued to work.
When the time was nearly finished, I had lots of things to do. My University advisor told that we needed at least a couple of moNths to finish it. However, in THE last two weeks I made a successful working mathematical model, then wrote the article and made the interesting presentation. My advisor was proud of me, and I was happy to enter the university before graduating from the high school. Furthermore, during this work I learned a lot about mathematics, computers, programming and acoustics.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that each plan should be realized. Even if one thinks that things are going badly, he or she should never give up. Each problem has a solution and my example is ALWAYS the simplest one. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Good work my friend. NEVER go into an exam or any endeavour with a feeling of uncertainty, you will surely succumb to its lure. ALWAYS be confident that you are the best there is at doing this particular thing. With your command of vocabulary you will always be able to write brilliant essays, but like old Kitos always says;
"Keep it simple
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#3 (permalink) Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:44 pm Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all. |
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What a valuable advice! Thanks, mr.Kitos. I do appreciate your help.
I have a small question: what is wrong with "field of mathematics". As arithmetics, artificial intelligence is the field of mathematics. |
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#4 (permalink) Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:50 pm Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all. |
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Sorry Arseni, do you regard mathematics as artificial intelligence? _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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#5 (permalink) Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:56 pm Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all. |
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I think that artificial intelligence is a part of mathematics. Arithmetics, geometry, logics, neural networks, digital signal processing and some other specific subject in fact are just modern representations of mathematical science. However, maybe the term "mathematics" should not be looked too widely. |
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#6 (permalink) Sun Jun 20, 2010 13:07 pm Sometimes an event that seems to be going badly turns out well after all. |
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Well, :-) if you pair AI and math together, then you are correct.
I chose to view them as two separate subjects. No problem. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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