When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, m

[Lajjagupta]

Topic: When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

A famous person has power to influence people. People like to listen him and trust his advice. That's why, many athletes, actors and rock stars come in advertisement to promote products. Although, they are famous but personally, I do not think that we should pay attention to these opinions. I have many reasons to hold this notion such as their personal interest associated with the promotion. I have doubt on their knowledge.They are not responsible for consequences of that advice.

To start with, many famous people have their own interest to promote their opinion. They are getting money from the company to say positive things about their products. For instance, Many famous actors come in advertisement of hard drinks and cigarette.They promote these bad habits because they are getting money.Although, there are many famous people who come in social advertisements like to promote education but I believe that we should not follow their advices.

In addition to their self interest, sometimes, they do not have any knowledge about what they are saying. Without having any idea, they promote products and notions which can be harmful for general public. From my own personal experience, I had seen a famous actress in an advertisement of a fairness cream. I purchased that cream in influence of that actress. After few months, I got allergy on my skin. My dermatologist advised me to stop using that cream. Many people get skin cancer by using these fairness creams.

Along with, self interest and their ignorance, they are not responsible if something happens wrong. For example, if I get skin cancer in above example, I have to suffer myself.

To conclude, I believe that we should not follow blindly these famous people. They are promoting things because they are earning money from advertisements. Sometimes they do not have any idea about that product. Moreover, they are not responsible for consequences of following their advice.

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[Kitosdad]

A famous person has THE power to influence people. People like to listen TO him and trust his advice. That's why, many athletes, actors and rock stars /come/FEATURE/ in advertisement to promote products. Although, they are famous but[s][/s] personally[/s], I do not think that we should pay attention to these opinions. I have many reasons to hold this notion such as their personal interest associated with the promotion. I have doubt on their knowledge.They are not responsible for THE consequences of that advice.

To start with, many famous people have their own interest to promote their opinion. They are getting money from the company to say positive things about their products. For instance, many famous actors /come/APPEAR/ in advertisementS of FOR hard /drinks/LIQUOR/ and cigaretteS.They promote these bad habits because they are getting money. Although, there are many famous people who come in social advertisements like to promote education(,) but I believe that we should not follow their ADVICE.

In addition to their self interest, sometimes, they do not have any knowledge about what they are saying. Without having any idea, they promote products and notions which can be harmful for general public. From my own personal experience, I had seen a famous actress in an advertisement of a fairness cream. I purchased that cream BEING BYof that actress. After A few months, I DEVELOPED AN allergy on my skin. My dermatologist advised me to stop using that cream. Many people get skin cancer by using these fairness creams.

Along with self interest and their ignorance, they are not responsible if something happens GOES wrong. For example, if I HAD CONTRACTED skin cancer in THE above example, I WOULD HAVE HAD to HAVE sufferED myself.

To conclude, I believe that we should not blindly follow blindly these famous people. They are promoting things because they are earning money from advertisements. Sometimes they do not have any idea about THE product THEY ARE PROMOTING. Moreover, they are not responsible for THE consequences of following their advice.
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Good work Lajjagupta.

Kitos. 7.5/10
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[Kitosdad]

A famous person has THE power to influence people. People like to listen TO him and trust his advice. That's why, many athletes, actors and rock stars /come/FEATURE/ in advertisement to promote products. Although, they are famous but[s][/s] personally[/s], I do not think that we should pay attention to these opinions. I have many reasons to hold this notion such as their personal interest associated with the promotion. I have doubt on their knowledge.They are not responsible for THE consequences of that advice.

To start with, many famous people have their own interest to promote their opinion. They are getting money from the company to say positive things about their products. For instance, many famous actors /come/APPEAR/ in advertisementS of FOR hard /drinks/LIQUOR/ and cigaretteS.They promote these bad habits because they are getting money. Although, there are many famous people who come in social advertisements like to promote education(,) but I believe that we should not follow their ADVICE.

In addition to their self interest, sometimes, they do not have any knowledge about what they are saying. Without having any idea, they promote products and notions which can be harmful for general public. From my own personal experience, I had seen a famous actress in an advertisement of a fairness cream. I purchased that cream BEING BYof that actress. After A few months, I DEVELOPED AN allergy on my skin. My dermatologist advised me to stop using that cream. Many people get skin cancer by using these fairness creams.

Along with self interest and their ignorance, they are not responsible if something happens GOES wrong. For example, if I HAD CONTRACTED skin cancer in THE above example, I WOULD HAVE HAD to HAVE sufferED myself.

To conclude, I believe that we should not blindly follow blindly these famous people. They are promoting things because they are earning money from advertisements. Sometimes they do not have any idea about THE product THEY ARE PROMOTING. Moreover, they are not responsible for THE consequences of following their advice.
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Good work Lajjagupta.

Kitos. 7.5/10
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Lajjagupta]

Thank you very much. I think I have to work more in ARTICLES. Thank you very much.

[Nzuahp]

Hi Lajjagupta,
The general presentation of your work is appealing but you need to give yourself about 5minutes to review your work.
In addition, try to be as accurate as possible when writing because some minor errors will not be easily trace during the review process.

You are such a good writer and I'm sure with time, you will be composing more interesting essays.
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Practice makes perfect.

[Lajjagupta]

Thank you very much to motivate me.

[Nzuahp]

You are welcome my friend.
Those are just few of the many tips to tackle the writing section of many English proficiency exams.
I have learned many writing tips from this forum especially from our dear Kitos and books and willing to share with any this forum members.

Wish you the best in your preparation.
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