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#1 (permalink) Mon Jun 21, 2010 15:22 pm amount of money to sport activities |
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Topic:" Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion."
****** I believe we will not have ideal society if we don’t have ideal universities. Maybe most of people think that the only function of colleges and universities is development of science and technology, and to get ready student for professional and scientific responsibility, but we should not neglect the other responsibility of universities that indeed is rearing next generation of our society, and sport is one the most important aspect of this goal.
It is proved that sport has undeniable effects on human health; also we know healthy mind belongs to healthy body. If we want to have lively society, it is crucial to fortify sports in all levels, and the best method to spread sport is in colleges and universities, because next generation will learn that along studying and knowledge, having a healthy body is real fortune, and eventually they are accustom to do exercise in their rest of lives.
Also, universities can with designating sport scholarship to talented student, help them, and change them to champions. In recent world, many big champions come from universities. Indeed, universities have saved them from unheralded and introduced them to sport worlds. Many of these champions have earned success and proud to their countries, or even for other countries that discovered them. Do not think it has been worthy?
In addition, prevailing sports in universities change the scientific and serious atmosphere of universities to friendly and lively atmosphere which lead to positive results on students, and motivate them to compete to each other. Friendship and competition, what a strong and magical complex.
Eventually, universities will not waste their resource if they invest on sport activities. It’s true that libraries are very important, but nobody can refuse the role of sport in our lives. On the other hand, who can forget fans that enjoy from watching sport match? I think science and sport are complement. ****
Thanks Your sincerely Reza
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Moohebat I'm here quite often ;-)

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#2 (permalink) Mon Jun 21, 2010 16:18 pm amount of money to sport activities |
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Topic:" Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students' sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion."
****** I believe we will not have AN ideal society if we do NOT have ideal universities. Maybe most of THE people think that the only function of colleges and universities is development of science and technology, and to get ready studentS for professional and scientific responsibility, but we should not neglect the other responsibility of universities that indeed is rearing THE next generation of our society, and sport is one the most important aspectS of this goal.
It is proved that sport has undeniable effects on human health; also we know A healthy mind belongs to A healthy body. If we want to haveA lively society, it is crucial to fortify sports in all levels, and the best method to spread sport is in colleges and universities, because THE next generation will learn that alongSIDE studying and knowledge, having a healthy body is A real fortune, and eventually they are accustom to do exercise FOR THE rest of THEIR lives.
Universities can with designating sport scholarship to talented studentS, help them, and change them INto champions. In TODAY'S world, many big champions come from universities. Indeed, universities have saved them from IGNOMINITY and introduced them to sport worlds. Many of these champions have earned success and ARE proud OF their countries, or even for other countries thatHAVE discovered them. Do YOU not think it has been worthy?
In addition, prevailing sports in universities changeS the scientific and serious atmosphere of universities to friendly and lively atmosphere which lead to positive results on students, and motivateS them to compete AGAINST each other. Friendship and competition, what a strong and magical complex.
Eventually, universities will not waste their resourceS if they invest IN sport activities. It IS true that libraries are very important, but nobody can REFUTE the role of sport in our lives. On the other hand, who can forget fans that enjoy watching sport match'S? I think science and sport are complementARY.
********************************************************************* Hello Moohebat. I think you need to swot-up on ARTICLES.
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#3 (permalink) Mon Jun 21, 2010 17:34 pm amount of money to sport activities |
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Thank you dear Kitosdad. I hope, I can use your advice. You know, it is difficult to change old habits. :) _________________ Where there is a will, there is way. |
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Moohebat I'm here quite often ;-)

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#4 (permalink) Mon Jun 21, 2010 19:09 pm amount of money to sport activities |
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C'mon Reza, we are only talking about "THE" and "A", it isn't rocket science my friend. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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