TOEFL® topic 24: Learn alone better or learn with a teacher better?

[Trung]

Topic 24: some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

Today, people always find a lot of different ways to learn well, such as they can learn from computers, from their friends, and from teachers. Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher, because they will concentrate and collect a lot of knowledge and experience from various kinds of books and other people better. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher, because he or she will help them solve difficult problems in studying. Therefore, I am confident that studying with teachers is the best way to learn for many reasons.

To begin with, teachers who have a lot of knowledge and experience will impart their experiences without any text books for students. Teachers will teach their students how to find the best way to learn, how to live with other people in society, how to reduce stress after day’s hard work… These experiences will become very important for us to achieve great success in our lives and work in the future, and students will never perceive them if they study alone.

Secondly, today, as education programmer is becoming more and more difficult, teachers will play an important role to help students learn and acquire lots of new knowledge better and faster. For example, in English study, I do not understand and communicate with other student in my class, so I want to learn and talk with my teacher, because when talking with him, I can remember a lot of new words and grammar. Besides, he will also teach me to pronounce exactly in English vocabulary, so I can become self-confident to communicate with other people. Therefore, teachers will be the good consultants for their students.

Lastly, during studying, teachers will understand ability of each student, so they will help students orient their students’ future careers. Therefore, students will choose careers that fit exactly their ability in the future. For example, if a student is good about mathematics and chemistry, teacher will encourage him or her to become a scientist. This will help students achieve success in their lives and work.
In conclusion, I always believe that teachers are very necessary for each student in studying; they will help students learn better and achieve great success in the life and work.

TOEFL listening discussions: What are the two students doing?

[Kitosdad]

Today, people always find a lot of different ways to learn well, such as they can learn from computers, from their friends, and from teachers.
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher, because they will concentrate and collect a lot of knowledge and experience from various kinds of books and other people better.
Others think that it is always better to have a teacher, because he or she will help them solve difficult problems in studying.
Therefore, I am confident that studying with teachers is the best way to learn for many reasons.

To begin with, teachers who have a lot of knowledge and experience AND THEY will impart their experiences without any text books for students. Teachers will teach their students how to find the best way to learn, how to live with other people in society, how to reduce stress after A day’s hard work…
These experiences will become BE very important for IN HELPING us to achieve great success in our lives(,) and IN OUR work in the future(.) Students will never perceive them if they study alone.

Secondly, today, as education programmer is becoming more and more difficult COMPLEX, teachers will play an important role to IN helpING students learn and acquire lots of new knowledge better and faster.
For example, in MY English studIES, I do not understand OR communicate with other studentS in my class, so I want to learn and talk with my teacher, because when talking with him I can remember a lot of new words and grammar.
Besides, he will also teach me HOW to pronounce exactly in English vocabulary, so I can become self-confident IN communicatING with other people. Therefore, Teachers will be ARE the good BEST consultants for their students.

Lastly, during studying, teachers will understand RECOGNISE THE ability of each student, so they will help students orient their students’ TOWARD THEIR future careers. Therefore,
Students will choose careers that fit exactly their abilitIES in the future.(REPETITIVE.)

For example, if a student is good IN BOTH mathematics and chemistry, HIS teacher will encourage him or her to become a scientist. This will help students achieve success in their lives and work.

In conclusion, I always believe that teachers are very necessary for each student in studying; they will help students learn better and achieve great success in theIR life and work.
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Good morning Trung. You work well, but avoid repeating points you have already made.

Kitos. 7.5/10
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