Modern technology is creating a single world culture.

[Kalyanisuresh]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Today, many countries are technologically well developed and other countries are being developed. People can share their ideas with the world because of modern technology. Many businesses and industrialists produce their goods worldwide. This means people have been adapted to a single culture. I support the following statement that the modern technology is creating a single world culture.

First of all, people of one country would share their ideas and exchange their culture with other countries through the internet. Today, several websites provide the opportunity to exchange their culture with the people worldwide. The best examples of these are face book and orkut etc. In this, various countries people would come and join to exchange their culture. Furthermore, since the last decade, there has been an increase in the number of International marriages. The International marriages means one country men or women would marry men or women of other country. In this type of marriages man and woman could exchange their culture and way of life. Finally, all of these people can have a chance to come under one culture.

Second reason, today many businesses sprawl all over the world. The main reason for this is people could adapt to the various countries culture such as eating habits and cultural habits etc. For example, McDonalds and KFC are famous for fast food in the USA first. Then these fast food cultures have been spreading through the various countries such as Australia, India, and China etc. Moreover, in my earlier days most of the products are limited to their own countries. But these days’ people could also start the usage of international products. So the Industrialists try to export their products worldwide. For instance, in last two decades people had used various mobile phones which are available in their countries. But today most of the people want to use iphone world wide.

Eventually, the technology has developed. The different types of People have changed their culture in different ways. These results can cause to create a single world. Finally, I conclude that the modern technology would help to create a single world culture.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a student and a university service representative

[Kitosdad]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Today, many countries are technologically well developed and other countries are being developed. People can share their ideas with the world because of modern technology. Many businesses and industrialists produce AND EXPORT their goods worldwide. This means people have /been adapted to/BECOME PART OF/ a single culture. I support the following statement that the modern technology is creating a single world culture.

First of all, people of one country /would/CAN/TRY TO/ share their ideas and exchange their culture with other countries through the Internet. Today, several MANY websites provide the opportunity to exchange their culture with OTHER people worldwide. (REPETITIVE)
The best examples of these are SITES SUCH AS FACEBOOK and Orkut etc.
/In this, various countries people would/ ON THESE SITES PEOPLE ARE ABLE TO/ come and join IN exchangING their cultureS.
Furthermore, s Since the last decade there has been an increase in the number of International marriages. The International marriages means /one country men or women would marry/PEOPLE MARRYING men or women of ANother country. In THESE typeS of marriages mEn and womEn could exchange their culture and wayS of life.
Finally, all of these people can have a chance to come under one culture.

Second reason, today many businesses sprawl all over the world. The main reason for this is people could adapt to the various countries culture(,) such as eating habits and cultural habits etc. For example, McDonalds and KFC WERE famous for fast food in the USA first. Then these fast food cultures have been spreading through the various countries such as Australia, India, and China etc. Moreover, i In my earlier days most of the products WERE limited to their own countries. But /these days’/NOWADAYS/ people could also start the usage of USING international products.
So the Industrialists try to export their products worldwide. For instance, in THE last two decades people HAVE used various mobile phones which are NOW available in their countries. But today most of the people want to use iphone world wide.

Eventually, the technology has developed. The different types of People have changed their culture in different ways. These results can cause to create a single world. Finally, I conclude that the modern technology would help to create a single world culture.
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Good morning Kalyanisuresh. You made a great attempt to write a good essay here.
Try to avoid repeating things you have already mentioned earlier. Try to avoid making your work too complex. Keep it simple and easy to understand.

Kitos. 7.5/10
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