Help me with these verses

[Elessar]

Hello!, please help me with these verses; for example I dont know if the "on my own" expression is well used.

I never feel on my own
cause ive always been weak and numb
and there is a sign of something is wrong
something's wrong in me, something wicked.

forgive my amateur english.... thanks

[Mister Micawber]

What do you mean 'on my own'? The phrase normally means 'independent'.
'Numb' makes no sense here.
'I've' is so spelt.
There are too many verbs in the 3rd line.
It does not seem to be a verse, since it has neither rhyme nor rhythm.
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[Elessar]

mmmmmmmm yeah, is completly wrong......... thanks