high school leavers are choosing to work or travel

[Lc17kenny]

In some countries， some high school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time before going to the university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for those school leavers’ decision. Give your own opinion and reasons using your own experience.

Nowadays an increasing number of students who just graduated form senior high school determine to seek a job or take a trip for a period time ,which is a frequent topic of discussion in some countries when people take it for account that whether it will bring school leavers benefits.

On the bright sides, school leavers having experienced a plenty of stress and burden in their senior high school need to relax themselves to some extent , hence, traveling or working may be their top choice .Besides ,only by working could high school graduates learn more useful skills ,working experience and sociability ,which they by no means acquired from their teachers. Moreover ,after traveling around the world ,they can also broaden their horizons ,appreciate natural landscape and even get close to nature to take a fresh breath.

On the dark sides , however ,owing to those students are busy with their job or travel during a period time ,they may neglect to continue to their education and even forget what they have learned in class . So it is likely to give rise them to fail to keep up with the pace of study in the college .Last but not least , because of lacking of sociability and experience, these high school graduates will be cheated and even teased when they look for a job a or take a trip.

As mentioned above , I personally think that without working or traveling for a period time , school leavers could lose experience and chance in their life .Therefore, nothing is more important than to work and travel before they attend college.

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[Kitosdad]

In some countries， some high school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time before going to the university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for those school leavers’ decision. Give your own opinion and reasons using your own experience.

Nowadays an increasing number of students who HAVE just graduated FROM senior high school determine to seek a job or take a trip for a period OF time ,which is a frequent topic of discussion in some countries when people take it for account that whether it will bring school leavers benefits.

On the bright sides, school leavers having experienced a plenty of stress and burden in their senior high school need to relax themselves to some extent , hence, traveling or working may be their top choice .Besides ,only by working could high school graduates learn more useful skills ,working experience and sociability ,which they by no means acquired from their teachers. Moreover ,after traveling around the world ,they can also broaden their horizons ,appreciate natural landscape and even get close to nature to take a fresh breath.

On the dark sides , however ,owing to those students are busy with their job or travel during a period time ,they may neglect to continue to their education and even forget what they have learned in class . So it is likely to give rise them to fail to keep up with the pace of study in the college .Last but not least , because of lacking of sociability and experience, these high school graduates will be cheated and even teased when they look for a job a or take a trip.

As mentioned above , I personally think that without working or traveling for a period time , school leavers could lose experience and chance in their life .Therefore, nothing is more important than to work and travel before they attend college.
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