Living in a big or a small city?

[Moohebat]

Topic: Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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When I hear about small cities, I imagine splendid scenery, blue sky, voice of birds and kind people. I really prefer to live in such city. It is true that in small cities, you miss a lot of chances for progressing, but instead you can live without any tension, without anxious about tomorrow, and you can enjoy from every moment of your life. In this situation every morning I can remember why I am living and it is a real endowment. In comparison with living in big cities that people get up early in the morning and do not know what are they doing? Or why are they doing their jobs? A complete aimless life.

Furthermore, people in small cities know each other and treat more kindly in comparison with big cities. consider a big city like New York. It is so big that even people do not know their neighbors. How a human can revive in such city? Everyone needs kindness and friendship. It is proved that social life and friendship have a positive effect on our health quality. If you have noticed, the oldest people of the world have lived in small towns. It shows a significance of relief on our life. In addition, living in a small city including of less danger than living in a big city. Almost all big cities around the world are industrial, and you know most of the accidents and disasters happen in these cities. so, living in such cities have potential danger in it.

Despite that living in small cities is more enjoyable, but we cannot neglect jobless in small cities. Occupation is very important for livelihood. Having a calm and stable life is depending on your financial state too. Nowadays, agriculture equipment does the responsibility of farmers, so farmers would rather use these equipment, because it is more profitable. As a result, job position has decreased in small town. This is one of the most crucial reasons of lack of tendency to living in small cities.

Nevertheless, I still like to live in a small city, because I want to enjoy my life. I only has been born for once. Then I prefer when I get up every morning from the bed, I know why I am living? and what is my destination.

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Thanks Reza

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[Kitosdad]

Topic: Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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When I hear about small cities, I imagine splendid scenery, blue sky, voice of birds and kind people. I really prefer to live in such A city. It is true that in small cities, you miss a lot of /chances/OPPORTUNITIES/ for progressing, but instead you can live without any tension, without anxiETY about tomorrow, and you can enjoy from every moment of your life.
In this situation, every morning I can remember why I am living(,) and it is a real endowment. In comparison TO living in big cities WHERE people get up early in the morning and do not know what they are doing? Or why are they doing their jobs? A complete aimless life.

Furthermore, people in small cities know each other and treat OTHERS more kindly in comparison with big cities. Consider a big city like New York. It is so big that people do not even know their neighbors. How can a human SURVIVE in such A city? Everyone needs kindness and friendship. It is proved that social life and friendship have a positive effect on THE QUALITY OF our health. If you have noticed, the oldest people of the world have lived in small towns. It shows a significance of relief In our life. In addition, living in a small city IS FAR less dangerOUS than living in a big city. Almost all big cities around the world are industrial, and you know most of the accidents and disasters happen in these cities. Living in such cities HAS potential danger.

Despite that, living in small cities is more enjoyable, but we cannot neglect THE jobless in small cities. Occupation is very important for livelihood. Having a calm and stable life is dependANT UPon your financial status too. Nowadays, agriculturAL equipment does the MAIN WORK of farmers, so farmers would rather use THIS equipment, because it is more profitable. As a result, job positionS HAVE decreased in small townS. This is one of the most crucial reasons FOR THE lack of tendency to living in small cities.

Nevertheless, I still like to live in a small city, because I want to enjoy my life. I HAVE only ONE LIFE. I prefer when I get up every morning from the bed, I know why I am living, and what my destination IS.
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Not bad at all Reza. Review your work and its alterations. See if you can notice the difference in structure. You are doing well, and improving daily. Well done.

Kitos. 7.5/10
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[Moohebat]

Thanks teacher. It was complete and nice review. :) we are lucky that you are helping us.
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