Parents are the best teachers

[Aameera]

Parents are those who start teaching at the beginning of our life. As far as I am concerned, I believe that parents are the best teachers in our life, because the way they educate, inspire and love their child is immeasurable.

First, parents start giving education from the initial years of child’s life. They give a portion of their lives for the better most of their child. They teach us how to talk, how to eat and learn to make difference between right and wrong. For Example, in the age of five my parent bought me a dog; they taught me how to take care, how to play and how to treat with a dog. The lessons which they gave made me a responsible person.

Second, parents are the inspiration of children. Usually children copy their parents and adopt the similar behavior. In the age of adolescence, we start thinking about our parents more as a role model. For example, when I was in college, my mother was lecturer in my college, I was inspired by my mother’s personality, because I found her committed , hardworking and one of my favorite teacher .On the other hand, it was really strange for me because all of my friends mothers were housewives but my mother wanted to work. She always told me just follow my heart, and encouraged me to do work. I think she was right, now I am working in university and I found many qualities of mother’s personality in me.

Finally, Parents are just like a diamond who shine their love in every step of our life. Their feelings for child can not be found in any other relation. Also, the patience they show when they teach us, when they give answers of non-stop questions and when they take stress for our exams touches the soul. For example, I have been working out of state since 2007, sometimes I really miss my parents, but whenever I talk to them I feel like a soft feather flying out of worries. When I think about my parents, I realized how much they love me. Their love gives me the extra strength to deal with real life problems.

In the sum, I believe that parents are the best teachers in our lives, because they educate, develop and love us. Think about your parents and evaluate what they did and what you have to do for them.
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Hello kitos rate this essay , i know there is some problem in punctuation and sentence structure but i want to know where is the problem.
Thanks
Aameera

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two students in a chemistry class

[Kitosdad]

Parents are those PEOPLE who start teaching US at the beginning of our life. As far as I am concerned, I believe that parents are the best teachers in our life, because the way they educate, inspire and love their child is immeasurable.

First, parents start /giving education/INSTRUCTING/ from the initial years of child’s life. They give a portion of their lives for the betterMENT most of their child. They teach us how to talk, how to eat and learn to make SHOW US THE difference between right and wrong.
For example, AT the age of five my parentS bought me a dog; they taught me how to take care, how to play and how to treat with a MY dog. The lessons which they gave HAVE made me a responsible person.

Second, parents are the SOLE inspiration of children. Usually children copy their parents and adopt the similar behavior TO THAT OF THEIR PARENTS. In the age of adolescence, we start thinking about our parents more as a role model. For example, when I was in college my mother was A lecturer in my college(.) I was inspired by my mother’s personality, because I found her committed, hard-working and one of my favorite teacherS.
On the other hand, it was really strange for me because all of my friends mothers were housewives(,) but my mother wanted to work. She always told me TO follow my heart, and encouraged me to do work. I think she was right(.) I am now working in A university TOO and I found many GOOD qualities of mother’s personality in me.

Finally, parents are just like a diamond, shinING their love BEFORE every step WE TAKE IN our life. Their feelings for THEIR child cannot be found in any other relationSHIP. Also, the patience they show when they teach us, when they give answers TO non-stop questions, and when they take THE stress OUT OF our IMPENDING exams, touches the soul.
For example, I have been working out of state since 2007/.) Sometimes I really miss my parents, but whenever I talk to them I feel like a soft feather flying AWAY FROM MY worries. When I think about my parents, I realize how much they love me. Their love gives me the extra strength to deal with real life problems.

In sumMING UP, I believe that parents are the best teachers in our lives, because they educate, develop and love us. Think about your parents and evaluate what they did FOR YOU IN YOUR EARLY YEARS, and what you have to do for them.
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Good morning Aameera. I didn't find and glaring problems in this work. All I found were the words of someone who obviously loves and respects his parents.
All in all, the essay was sound and well written. Punctuation is a problem for everyone in every language. If you were to read your essay aloud you would hear where the commas need to be placed.

Kitos. 8/10
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Aameera]

Thanks kitos