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[Aidacik]

Wrote it in 40 minutes as needed without any extra look at it, would be happy for mark as in IELTS from 9 band)))

Advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. The most effective :
Comics
Books
Radio
TV
Film
Theatre
Nowadays Media has a strong influence on our perception of different information, opinion and communicating information. There a lot of kind of Media in modern world but we can underline the most 3 essential for communicating information, they are first of all TV which are watched every day by almost 99% of the whole population, secondly Books which human being did not stop to read by appearance of more modern technology as TV, and the last media is Radio which is listened mostly by teenagers and young people. These 3 types of media in my opinion are the most significant factors influencing people which have advantages as well as disadvantages too. First of all let’s define advantages and disadvantages separately one by one.
Television is the most popular among Media because you can in watch every happened scene with your eyes and at the same time listen, that’s why it is very interesting and easy for everybody to absorb full information from TV and get fresh news in full form. In spite of this, TV has of course some disadvantages, firstly it harms persons health by its radiation and the second thing is that by watching TV you can do nothing else except sitting in front of it.
Books are also very important communicator in information, they are much diversified and you can find any kind you like in any style of writing and with different kinds of topic. If you look for information in particular sphere you can just go to library and find it in a very quick way. The disadvantage of Books can be that it takes much time to read it and to know about sth detailed.
The last one is Radio which our teenagers like to listen to music but not to get the information. The advantage of the Radio is that it reports only the main content of news and also you can use it and at the same time do your own work at home for example or on your way to somewhere. But radio always reports news for example in a very short way that you can not see the full picture of happened thing.
In conclusion I think that three of this Media are the most essential in communicating information and can help to get it in a way that a particular person needs.

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[Kitosdad]

Wrote it in 40 minutes as needed without any extra look at it, would be happy for mark as in IELTS from 9 band)))

Advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. The most effective :
Comics
Books
Radio
TV
Film
Theatre
Nowadays media has a strong influence on our perception of different information, opinion and communicating information. There are a lot of kinds of Media in OUR modern world but we can underline the THREE most 3 essential for communicating informatio;, they are first of all TV(,) which IS watched every day by almost 99% of the whole population, secondly books, which human beingS did not stop to read BECAUSE OF THE ARRIVAL of more modern technologIES as TV, and the last media is Radio which is listened TO mostly by teenagers and young people. These THREE types of media in my opinion are the most significant factors influencing people, which have advantages as well as disadvantages too. First of all let’s define advantages and disadvantages separately one by one.
Television is the most popular among Media because you can in watch every happened scene AS IT HAPPENS with your eyes and at the same time listen, that’s why it is very interesting and easy for everybody to absorb full information from TV and get fresh news in full form. In spite of this, TV has of course some disadvantages, firstly it harms persons health by its radiation and the second thing is that by watching TV you can do nothing else except sitting in front of it.
Books are also very important communicatorS OF information,) They are VERY diversified and you can find any kind you like in any style of writing and with different kinds of topic. If you ARE LookING for information in A particular sphere you can just go to library and find it in a very quick way. The disadvantage of A book can be that it takes much time to read it and to know about SOMETHING detailed.

The last one is Radio ON which teenagers like to listen to music but not to get the information. The advantage of the radio is that it reports only the main content of news and also you can use it and at the same time do your own work at home for example or on your way to somewhere. But radio always reports news for example in a very short way that you cannot see the full picture of WHATEVER happened .
In conclusion I think that THESE THREE MADIAS are the most essential in communicating information and can help ONE to get it in a way that a particular person needs.
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Not bad Aidacik, but you need to work on your sentence structure. It is very lame.

Kitos. 7/10
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