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[Russianlatty]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Some people may hold the opinion that invention of the internet has had negative effects on your civilization. Others have a different attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that invention of the internet is one of the most significant invention in the world because of its advantages. I would explore only a few of the most important advantages here.

First of all, no one can deny that, internet provides many opportunities for people. Thus, people have saved time since invention of internet. For instance, People can buy their electricity bill and send files to eachother by using internet also goverments have used the internet to arrange their official documents. In the past, people had to sent their letter by mail. So, sometimes transportation took their five days. Now, sending letter or information about a subject takes us five minutes.


Second benefit of using internet is easiness of communication. In the past minority of the people had a opportunity to use telephone. Also quality of wave is very low and you couldn’t it whenewer you want. After the invention of internet, communication has started to develop day by day. Nowadays, majority of people in the world have internet so, communication is very widespread and cheap thanks to internet.

Finally, People have used to internet for having fun. There are many games, chat programs, films and musics in the internet world. You can watch film, whenever and wherever you want also you can have some games to play by forming a group with your friends or If you want to have a friend, you can find it from friendship sides on the internet.

In a word, Internet has many advantages if you know to use it properly and carefully so I full agree that internet is an important facility to save time, to have fun. Maybe, In the future, Internet will use for everything and paper will be a thing of the past.

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[Kitosdad]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Some people may hold the opinion that THE invention of the Internet has had negative effects on your civilization. Others have a different attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that invention of the Internet is one of the most significant invention in the world because of its advantages. I would explore only a few of the most important advantages here.

First of all, no one can deny that THE Internet provides many opportunities for people. Thus, people have saved time since invention of THE Internet. For instance, people can PAY their electricity bill and send files to each other by using THE Internet(.) GoverNments have used the Internet to arrange their official documents. In the past, people had to senD their letter by mail. So, sometimes transportation took their five days. Now, sending A letter or information about a subject takes us five minutes.


Second benefit of using THE Internet is THE easiness of communication. In the past A minority of the people had THE opportunity to use telephoneS. Also quality of wave WAS very low and you could NOT USE it wheneVer you wantED. After the invention of THE Internet, communication has started to develop day by day. Nowadays, THE majority of people in the world have Internet so communication is very widespread and cheap thanks to THE Internet.

Finally, people have used to THE Internet for having fun. There are many games, chat programs, films and musics in the Internet world. You can watch filmS, whenever and wherever you want(.) also y You can PLAY some games to play by forming a group with your friends or if you want to have a friend, you can find ONE from friendship siTes on the Internet.

In a word, THE Internet has many advantages if you know to use it properly and carefully(,) so I fullY agree that THE Internet is an important facility to save time, to have fun. Maybe, in the future, THE Internet will BE useD for everything(,) and paper will be a thing of the past.
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Good morning RL. Internet is a proper noun and is always spelt with a capital "I."
Try to avoid using the same word over and over, as this becomes boring to the reader.

Kitos. 7.5/10
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