If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what perso

[Thucuyen]

"If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet?" Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

If I could meet a famous person from history, I would like to meet President Ho Chi Minh. I admire him because of his talent. He was not only a great leader of Vietnamese people but also a great poet in Vietnamese literature. Furthermore, he was a good example for our generation to follow.

President Ho Chi Minh’s leading talents are well-known. He leaded Vietnamese people to fight against aggression. And finally, Vietnamese people could gain freedom and independence. If I could meet him, I would ask him what power and will had helped him do this.

President Ho Chi Minh was the best poet of Vietnam. When I was in high school, I learned lots of his great works. Through these, I could see his life and Vietnamese people’s life in the war. He created and left valuable treasure of literary works for our generation. It would be inspiring to meet him.

President Ho Chi Minh was not only a unique person but also a smart and talented person. He set a good example for the Vietnamese young generation. He devoted all his life to fight for independence, freedom and happiness of our nation. If I could meet him, I would express my gratefulness for his sacrifice and great contribution.

In fact, I just know him and his talents through my subjects which I studied at high school. That's why I would like to learn more about him. It would be a motivation for me to meet him.

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[Kitosdad]

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[Kitosdad]

"If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to meet?" Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

If I could meet a famous person from history, I would like to meet President Ho Chi Minh. I admire him because of his talent. He was not only a great leader of THE Vietnamese people but also a great poet in Vietnamese literature. Furthermore, he was a good example for our generation to follow.

President Ho Chi Minh’s leading talents are well-known. He LED THE Vietnamese people to fight against aggression(,) and finally, Vietnamese people could gain freedom and independence. If I could meet him, I would ask him what power and will had helped him do this.

President Ho Chi Minh was the best poet IN Vietnam. When I was in high school, I STUDIED lots of his great works. Through these, I could see his life and Vietnamese people’s life in the war. He created and left A valuable treasure of literary works for our generation. It would be inspiring to meet him.

President Ho Chi Minh was not only a unique person but also a smart and talented person. He set a good example for the Vietnamese youngER generation. He devoted all his life to fight for independence, freedom and happiness of our nation. If I could meet him, I would express my gratefulness for his sacrifice and great contribution.

In fact, I just know him and his talents through my subjects which I studied at high school. That IS why I would like to learn more about him. It would be a motivation for me to meet him.
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A very good essay Thucuyen. You are a welcome addition to this Forum, and this work shows how a very good essay can be written using only simple vocabulary.
Thank you.

Kitos. 8.5/10
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[Thucuyen]

thank you so much Kitos