some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines

[Moohebat]

Topic:"some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer?"

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It is obvious that human during the years has tried to make easier his life. All the stuffs and inventions which we had, proved this issue. Nowadays machines do a lot of our jobs. For example technology has saved a lot of miners from death and accident, but modern life has its problems and difficulties too. Depending to technology so much can cause health problem for us, also robots has destroyed a lot of job positions ,moreover has deprived us from a natural life. Then I think we should keep doing works by hand.

Our body is created to have normal physical activity. Advent of technology has change this basic. We travel by vehicles instead of walking; even we buy foods that are provided by robots in factories. In addition health of our body, physical activities lead to emotional improvements. It is true that welfare is pleasant, but with what cost?
Every day we hear in news that one company decreased its employees. Because machines can do the same works with less expenditure. A lot of workers become jobless. It seems we have forgotten that we wanted technology for better life. Then how these poor employees can enjoy from life, without any income and job? We should consider in future human population will grow more and more and we will need more job position in the world.

On the other hand, I believe working by hand still can teach us a lot of good experiences, and can apply our innovation. Moreover, we can use proved theories in practice which It can cause discovery the flaws and eventually creation new theories.

Lastly, I think we should use machines and hands together. Temperance is the best solution. We can apply technology for dangerous jobs, and keep traditional process for routine works.
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TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from an American History class
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[Kitosdad]

Topic:"some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer?"

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It is obvious that humanS haVE tried to make THEIR LIVES easier. All the CHANGES and inventions which we haVE, prove this issue. Nowadays machines do a lot of our WORK.
For example(,) technology has saved a lot of miners from death and accidentS, but modern life has its problems and difficulties too. Depending ON technology so much can cause health problemS for us(.) Robots haVE destroyed a lot of job positions AND deprived us OF a natural life. I think we should keep doing work by hand.

Our body is created to have normal physical activity. THE advent of technology has changeD this basic FUNCTION. We travel by vehicles instead of walking; WE EVEN buy food that IS MANUFACTURED by robots in factories. In addition THE CONDITION of our bodIES AND physical activities lead to emotional improvements. It is true that welfare is pleasant, but AT what cost?
Every day we hear in THE news that one company HAS REDUCED its NUMBER OF employees(,) because machines can do the same AMOUNT OF work with less expenditure.
A lot of workers HAVE become jobless. It seems we have forgotten that we wanted technology for A better life. Then how CAN these poor employees enjoy THEIR life without any income OR job? We should consider THAT in future THE human population will grow more and more and we will need more job positionS in the world.

On the other hand, I believe working by hand can still teach us a lot of good experiences, and WE can apply our innovation. Moreover, we can use proveN theories in practice which can discover the flaws and eventually RESULT IN THE creation OF new theories.

Lastly, I think we should use machines and hands together. Temperance is the best solution. We can apply technology for dangerous jobs, and keep traditional processES for routine works.
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You obviously feel strongly about this subject. Don't let your feelings control your words. This was not up to your usual standard my friend. Slow down and concentrate.

Kitos. 7/10
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[Moohebat]

You are right my friend :).
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