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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is a fact that rate of the playing games in order to have fun and deal with stress have inreased day by day in the world. Some people may hold the opinion that winning a game is not important and the most important thing is only playing game. Others have a different attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree with that winning is the real aim in a game. When I win a game, I would be happy as everybody. I would explore only a few of the most important reason ones here.

First off all, no one can deny that, when you play a game with your friends, you want to win it because of your desire. Many people have stress after a stressful day so, our brains want to forget the day by doing something that is liked by our brains and one of them is winning. Thus, my brain like to win in orter to get rid off stressfull life. In addition, being human want to have nice things like winnig. Tinies serves as a typical example. While they are playing football eachother, you can see ambition of them.

Secondly, when a people win a game, he/she has started to have self confidence. So that, he/she start being relax of his/her connection in the society. Furthermore, when I win a game, generally I talk about winner of game in everywhere. This behaivour gives me hapiness. On the other hand, I can be sad in my mind If I do not win the game. May be I don’t talk about my sadness But realy I feel bad.

In a word, taking into acount of all my explain, we may reach the conclusion that winning a game is a way to be happy and to rest from my point of view. Also, taking a good result of a game can provides my self confindence in the life. To sum up, I like being winner in a game everytime.

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[Kitosdad]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing a game is fun only when you win. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

It is a fact that rate of the playing games in order to have fun and deal with stress have inCreased day by day in the world. Some people may hold the opinion that winning a game is not important(,) and the most important thing is only IN THE playing OF THE game. Others have a different attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree with that winning is the real aim in a game. When I win a game, I would be AS happy as everybody. I would explore only a few of the most important reasonS ones here.

First off OF all, no one can deny that, when you play a game with your friends, you want to win it because of your desire. Many people have stress after a stressful day so, our brains want to forget the day by doing something that is liked by our brains(,) and one of them is winning. Thus, my brain likeS to win in orDer to get rid off MY stressful life. In addition, being A human WE ALL want to have nice things like winnig. Tinies LITTLE CHILDREN serves SERVE as a typical example. While they are playing football WITH each other you can see THE ambition IN EACH OF them.

Secondly, when a people win a game, he/she has started STARTS to have self confidence. So that, he/she startS TO being relax of his/her connection in the society. Furthermore, when I win a game, generally I talk about BEING THE winner of THE game in everywhere. This BEHAVIOUR /gives/BRINGS/ me hapPiness. On the other hand, I can be sad in my mind If I do not win the game. Maybe I DO NOT talk about my sadness but I realLy feel bad.

In a word, taking into acCount of all my EXPLANATIONS, we may reach the conclusion that winning a game is a way to be happy(,) and to rest from my point of view. Also, taking a good result of a game can provide ME WITH self confidence in the life. To sum up, I like being THE winner in a game every time.
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Good morning RL. Not a bad essay, but you can do better than this.

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