Student should be required to take classes outside of their major field of study

[Jiasuki]

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College offers students many fields of study. After they become college students, they can choose what they want to learn but some colleges require students to select classes not only inside of their major fields but also outside. In my opinion , I strongly agree that college should require every students to take classes outside of their major fields of study. Here are the reason.
First of all, Studying other major fields give them a chance to make friend with other students in different major fields. From my experience when I was a university student. My faculty requires every students to take at least 2 classes in other faculties every semesters. I chose to study law and sports. I made a lot of new friends while I was studying. I would not know them , if I did not study that subjects. I keep contact with them until now.
The second reason to support this statement is that studying other fields help enhancing students' knowledge because some subjects from other faculties can link to their own field. For example , if students who major in business field want to know more about consumer behavior , they can have a good chance to study general psychology in Psychology faculty which they can adapt this subject to the business and help them understanding about consumer behavior .
Studying other fields will let students have connection as well as enhance their knowledge which I believe that these are good for them not only education but also their social life and their future.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two university professors

[Kitosdad]

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College offers students many fields of study. After they become college students, they can choose what they want to learn(,) but some colleges require students to select classes not only inside of their major fields but also outside. In my opinion , I strongly agree that college should require every students to take classes outside of their major fields of study. Here are the reasonS.

First of all, studying other major fields give them a chance to make friendS with other students in different major fields. From my experience(,) when I was a university student my faculty requireD every student to take at least TWO classes in other faculties every semesters. I chose to study law and sports. I made a lot of new friends while I was studying. I would not know them if I HAD not studIED THOSE subjects. I keep contact with them EVEN TODAY.

The second reason to support this statement is that studying other fields helpS IN enhancing students' knowledge(,) because some subjects from other faculties can link to their own field. For example , if students who major in A business field want to know more about consumer behavior, they can have a good chance to study general psychology in THE Psychology faculty(.) They can adapt this subject to theIR business and help them understand about consumer behavior .
Studying other fields will HELP students MAKE NEW connectionS as well as enhance their knowledge(,) which I believe are good for them not only IN education(,) but also their social life and their futureS.
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Good work Jiasuki: An interesting opinion.

Kitos. 8/10
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