PLEASE CHECK MY GRAMMAR...

[PinkAngel]

Hello, I'm PinkAngel. I'm from Indonesia.
Please check and correct my grammar and wording.
I have a friend, her name is Karen. I have been friend with her for 5 years. Oneday, I invited her to go to the mall, and I wanted to buy a book. But, she refused with an angry expression. I was confused why she was angry with me, it was unusual. I efforted to investigate about that. Finally, I knew that my friend, names "X" was against another me and Karen. The story is very long. Finally, I be friend with Karen again.
>> I'm sorry if my grammar and wording is wrong<<

[Sidle Jinks]

Hi Pink Angel!

I would write it this way:

I have a friend, her name is Karen. We have been friends for five years. One day I invited her to go to the mall, I wanted to buy a book. But she refused, and her face was angry. I was confused why she was angry with me, it was unusual. I tried to find out more about that. Finally I got to know that my friend named X had been against me and Karen (though I wouldn't call X my friend). The story is very long. But in the end, Karen and I are friends again!

Hope this helps! But I'm not a native speaker, that's why mistakes are still possible
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[PinkAngel]

Thank's, Sidle Jinks !

[Conchita]

The right expression is: I'm not good at English, not in. But why don't you say: I'm getting better at English? -- it sounds more positive .

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