Dicusive topic: Damage of environment is an avoidable consequence?

[Junpi]

With development of economy and technology, standard of living in the world has been improved. However, the environment can be damaged because of speedy development in the world. This essay will discuss why damage of the environment is an avoidable consequence or not.

The major reason supporting this issue is that people destroy nature for different purpose without awareness. Many forests are cut down because people need to expand their spaces for building cities, factories, schools or supermarkets. Consequently, the balance of the environment is broken. Wild animals do not have spaces to exist or lack of foods. This can result in the decrease in some kind of animals.

The second reason why improvement in standard of living is pollution. Waste and industrial toxin are released into the environment without full settlement. Moreover, the increase of modern vehicles such as cars, buses, taxes or motorbikes leads to air pollution because of exhaust from them.

These are some reasons which supporting this issue. However, this essay will look at some reasons against them.

The first reason against to this issue is that people have more knowledge to protect the environment. People’s knowledge are improving because they have better education and use more technology such as the Internet to find environmental information. Many organization are set up to solve environmental problems.

The second reason against is that people can clean the environment by new technology. In many countries, waste can be recycled. Also, scientists has invented green vehicles such as car running by steam engine. And, alternative energies such as solar, wind, tidal and hydro energy are being used for heat purpose.

To conclude, the environment could be damaged but people have better awareness of protecting the environment. In many countries, development with the best protecting of the environment is popular. To illustrate, there are many green cities, such as Malmo in Sweden or Reykjavik in Iceland.

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TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between two students at their university cafeteria

[Kitosdad]

With THE development of THE economy and technology, standardS of living in the world has been improved. However, the environment can be damaged because of TOO speedILy development in the world. This essay will discuss why WHETHER damage TO the environment is an avoidable consequence or not.

The major reason supporting this issue is that people destroy nature for different purposeS without awareness. Many forests are cut down because people need to expand their space for building cities, factories, schools or supermarkets. Consequently, the balance of the environment is broken. Wild animals do not have space to exist or lack of food. This can result in the decrease OR EVEN EXTINCTION in some kind of animals.

The second reason why IS FROM THE improvement in OUR standard of living AND THE pollution IT CREATES. Waste and industrial toxinS are released into the environment without full settlement. Moreover, the increase of modern vehicles such as cars, buses, taxIs or motorbikes leads to air pollution because of THE exhaust GASES from them.
These are some reasons which support this issue. However, this essay will look at some reasons against them.
The first reason against to this issue is that people have more knowledge to protect the environment. People’s knowledge IS improving because they have better education and use more technology such as the Internet to find environmental information. Many organizationS are BEING set up to solve environmental problems.

The second reason against is that people can clean the environment by USING new technology. In many countries, waste can be recycled. Also, s Scientists HAVE invented green vehicles such as carS THAT run by USING A steam engine. And, Alternative energies such as solar, wind, tidal and hydro energy are being used for heatING purposeS.

To conclude, the environment could be damaged, but people TODAY have A better awareness of protecting the environment. In many countries, development with the best protectION of the environment is popular. To illustrate, there are many green cities, such as Malmo in Sweden or Reykjavik in Iceland.
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All in all, a pretty good essay Junpi. You are certainly improving.

Kitos. 8/10
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[Junpi]

thank you so much
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