How do i write request for salary increase

[Thiyages]

Sub:Request for Salary Increase

Respected Sir,

I would like to get to your notice that, I have been working in X Catering Maintenance for the last 11 Years. I am very sincere to my work and loyal to the company. Considering my earlier records, as a senior and experienced employee of X Catering Maintenance. I have been led to believe that you are satisfied with my work and have come forward requesting the company to recognize and provide me adequate benefits.

I am confident that you will want to sincerely consider my request.

Thanking you,

Yours sincerely,
X

[Beeesneees]

Dear Sir,

I would like to apply for a salary increase, and I am submitting the following information in support of my application.

I hope you will consider that I have been working at X Catering Maintenance for the past eleven years. In that time I have proved to be sincere in my work and loyal to the company. I am a senior employee and I believe that my experience brings benefits to the company. I understand that you are satisfied with my work. To this end, I would like to request that the company recognize my commitment and provide me with adequate benefits.

I am confident that you will consider my request with sincerity and look forward to hearing from you in due course.

Thank you.

Yours faithfully,
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Cheers m' dears!

[Thiyages]

thank you for your support mam.

[Alan]

Hi Thiyages,

A point to bear in mind when writing a letter such as this or indeed a letter applying for a job is to avoid using the

personal pronoun 'I' too often.

Alan
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[Thiyages]

Dear Mr.Alan,

Could you please correct the above letter? if any mistakes available.

Thanks
Thiyages

[Beeesneees]

[Mordant]

In my experience, using "I" in this sort of letter has been fine. It's entirely about you. Academic writing is another matter.

[Alan]

It's not a rule but based on my reading of many applications for jobs.

Alan
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[Beeesneees]

Your personal preference then. Fine. We are all entitled to our own opinions based on our own experiences.
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Cheers m' dears!

[Norbert3]

Hi Guys, I really like this one/I mean Thiyages version/. I have only one note to this version of sal. incr. letter. At the end of the letter, maybe a "thank you very much in advance" would be a more polite one, than the original thanks form.
I'm really looking forward to having your comments.
all the best, N