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[Torsten]

Hi everyone, can you please help me improve and edit this sales letter? Many thanks, Torsten

Dear Sir or Madam,

We, the LouverTop company, are a long-time business partner of WindowPro Corp.

We have been realizing a lot of national and international projects together.

Our company is a major player in the field of developing, selling and servicing louvre windows and natural smoke and heat exhaust ventilators (NSHEVs).

Today we would like to intodruce ourselves and offer our brand new product catalogue to you.

It gives you an overview of our innovative and wide product range.

Furthermore the catalogue provides you with an impression of the high architectural demands that our solutions are able to meet. You will find selected reference objects in our brochure.

We are sure, that the new catalogue is a tool that helps you to complete your offers with special louvre windows systems.

If you are interested in our products, we would be grateful to hear from you.

PS: Please, visit our website www.LouverTop.com

Yours faithfully

James Last
Sales Manager

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[Beeesneees]

Here's my suggestion:

Dear Sir or Madam,

We, the LouverTop company, are a long-time business partner of WindowPro Corp, with whom we have realized many national and international products.

Our company is a major player in the field of developing, selling and servicing louvre windows and natural smoke and heat exhaust ventilators (NSHEVs).

Today we would like to intodruce ourselves (You've just done that which makes this line unnecessary) We would like to offer you the opportunity to view our brand new product catalogue, which will provide you with an overview of our innovative and wide product range.

Furthermore, the catalogue provides an impression of the high architectural demands that our solutions are able to meet. You will find selected reference objects in our brochure to give you an idea of how the items can be used.

We are sure you will find that the new catalogue is an indispensible companion which will enable you to complete the look of your home or office by utilizing one of our special louvre windows systems.

You can also find details of our products, plus any current special deals (I presume?) on our website at www.LouverTop.com . If you would like further details about our range or any of the products it contains, then we would be very happy to answer your queries. Please do not hesitate to contact us.

We look forward to being of service to you in the very near future.

Yours faithfully,

James Last
Sales Manager
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Cheers m' dears!

[Torsten]

Hi Bev, thanks a lot for your quick and professional response!

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