#2 (permalink) Sat Jul 17, 2010 6:01 am Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of ti |
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Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
In my opinion, people should move to another place to /look for/SEEK/ better living conditions. Some people move to another place to /run away/FLEE/ from war in their home country, other people move to escape from poverty but overall, people usually move to another place to look for a better living conditionS.
As every human being, w When people are LIVING in an environment that attend all SUITS their primary needS, people THEY tend to be accommodated in that place STAY THERE forever. On the other hand, when people are uncomfortable and unhappy with their actual living conditionS, THEY normally people go look for another place that better attendS their needS.
During The World War II, the majority of the population in Europe was WERE living under extremely bad living conditionS, especially for the civilianS. Due to the war, industrial production was focused on supplyING the /soldiers and army/ARMED FORCES/. Therefore, the economy in Europe at that time was practically NON-existent; consequently millions of people were sick, unemployed and living in starvation. To escape from poverty and so SUCH bad living conditionS, a massive number of people from all partS of the Europe moveD to America. In THIS new country, most of the people /found out/DISCOVERED/ an ideal environment which allowed them to put all OF their effortS INto TRYING TO prosper and create new roots. Nowadays, the main reason why people move from one place to another is to search for a better workING conditionS. When people are unsatisfied with their actual work conditionS or their work environment, people THEY end to be unproductive or even to be CREATE a bad influence ON their co-workerS. Therefore, people should move to another place to look for a better workING condition that better suit them. After finding what they are looking for, people tend to be more productive and put all their effortS INto achievING good results.
Overall, people tend to move from one place to another when the previous place or living conditions are no longer attending PROVIDING what they need. In my opinion, people should always move to look for a better living conditionS that better /attend/MEET/SERVE/SATISFY/ their needS rather than stayING IN THE same place and complaining about how miserable their LIVES ARE. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Good morning Spoon. Again you are producing excellent work. You appear to have become a little more concentrated in your writing. This is very good work.
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