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#2 (permalink) Sat Jul 17, 2010 7:44 am not only "something" but also "something else" as well |
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Neither is required here. The sentence could simply end at "temperatures" without the meaning being lost. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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Kitosdad Language Coach

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#3 (permalink) Sat Jul 17, 2010 8:53 am not only "something" but also "something else" as well |
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| I would retain "also" as part of the correlative conjunction "not only ... but also." However, I would not use both "also" and "as well." It's true that neither is necessary, but they almost never are. |
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#4 (permalink) Sat Jul 17, 2010 9:09 am not only "something" but also "something else" as well |
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Hi Tofu,
The sentence is badly put together.
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| We had an El Nino episode in the early part of the year that's now faded but that has contributed to the warmth not only in equatorial Pacific but also contributed to anomalously warm global temperatures as well," Mr Lawrimore said. |
'Not only .. but also' requires a balance, which doesn't apply here. In other words 'not only to' is attached to 'equatorial Pacific' and then to 'contributed'. Furthermore there are two different tenses used 'has contributed' and 'contributed'. 'as well' is redundant. One further point -' but that has contributed' is better expressed as 'which has however contributed'
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