#2 (permalink) Sat Jul 17, 2010 12:33 pm Hi.this is my first writnig. please some body correct it for me.Thanks a lot |
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Everyone has various period times in his life. Some of them is wiling for him, but sometimes an event can ruin some years of life. One of these periods that is the best time of living for many of people around the world is college years. Going to college in different countries and in diverse personality brings about many pleasant and exciting times. For some people because of some unpredictable occurrences, college period can become to a disastrous years. But I do not want to discuss about exceptions. There are different reasons that college period is one of the best part of life that every one of them is related to many things like culture, personality and etc. A person while is entering to college that has passed a period that was full of limitation and deficiency and also after the finishing the college, he has to experience the responsibility and various difficulties in life. Everyone in college spends his life in a free situation compare with past and also he has not a lot of responsibility to his life and others. Just the most important thing in his life is education. These situations causes we have better times in this period of our lives. Furthermore, most of our friendships have started in college and some of us fall in love in these years and the most important thing is this period is equal to youth.In college, we spend a lot of our time with our coeval and it brings so memorable times such as laughing, interesting happens, familiarizing with each other and many different events that most of us can not forget these. Apart from this there are some people that they found their loves in the college. Because of atmosphere of college falling in love happens a lot! The students that study in a college usually have almost same characteristics and culture. So they unconsciously become closer together and sometimes this closing converts to love. And I think there is nobody that does not agree with that falling in love is the best time in every person's life. ...................................................................................................................... Good afternoon Sajjad. This work is very confusing. You need to adhere to the topic. Please attempt to make your meaning clearer and repost it. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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