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#2 (permalink) Tue Jul 20, 2010 5:40 am Usage of while: While he was playing, I sat beside him. |
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Yes, your 2nd sentence is fine. In fact, it is the first sentence that is suspect-- I certainly wouldn't call it correct. Use the progressive for both verbs if both actions are continuing for the same duration. _________________ Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's |
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Mister Micawber Language Coach
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#3 (permalink) Wed Jul 21, 2010 7:19 am Usage of while: While he was playing, I sat beside him. |
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| They're both fine to me. Whether they did or didn't have the same duration, they both make sense and are grammatical. |
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Mordant Language Coach
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#4 (permalink) Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:39 am Usage of while: While he was playing, I sat beside him. |
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| Thanks Mordant for clarification. I was very surprised by MM's answer (regrading his comments on the first sentence), but I do respect him. Maybe, at the moment of giving my answer, he just overlooked the first one unintentionally. Thanks a lot to both you and Mister Micawber again! |
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Learner7 I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#5 (permalink) Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:48 am Usage of while: While he was playing, I sat beside him. |
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No, I did not overlook it. I stand by my statement. Now, if it read like this-- While he was playing, I sat down beside him-- then I would find it more acceptable, since it now clearly reflects an 'instantaneous' act. _________________ Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's |
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Mister Micawber Language Coach
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#6 (permalink) Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:59 am Usage of while: While he was playing, I sat beside him. |
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| Thanks to Mister Micawber again for his logic and clarification. |
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Learner7 I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#7 (permalink) Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:06 am Usage of while: While he was playing, I sat beside him. |
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I think the addition of 'down' is a miniscule point and also found the first sentence acceptable. _________________ Cheers m' dears! |
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Beeesneees Language Coach

Joined: 08 Apr 2010 Posts: 20433 Location: UK, born and bred
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#8 (permalink) Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:24 am Usage of while: While he was playing, I sat beside him. |
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Beeesneees, I agree with you completely. Because, in Betty S. Azar's book I saw, While I was sleeping, the phone rang. And in explanation she wrote, "A while-clause describes an activity that was in progress at the time another activity happened." Basic English Grammar, Betty. S. Azar
However, as I am not a native, I have to listen to and respect all.
Thanks to you a lot. |
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Learner7 I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#9 (permalink) Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:31 am Usage of while: While he was playing, I sat beside him. |
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That's just what I said! Somebody ain't listening to somebody. _________________ Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's |
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Mister Micawber Language Coach
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#10 (permalink) Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:01 am Usage of while: While he was playing, I sat beside him. |
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I think some misunderstanding is going on here!
Mister Micawber wrote (in his first post) "I certainly wouldn't call it correct." Now I think he wanted to say, I certainly wouldn't call it incorrect. Sir! Is it okay? And it would mean that, you just added the 'down' later to mean its a better way to express it ....right?
I respect and thank all! |
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Learner7 I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#11 (permalink) Wed Jul 21, 2010 14:08 pm Usage of while: While he was playing, I sat beside him. |
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Actually, I forgot I wrote that; what I remember is that I thought it was suspect. I thought 'down' improved it, but others don't, so there we are. I'm moving on. _________________ Native English teacher at Mister Micawber's |
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