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[Dianova Olga]

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Dear teachers,
I need your help with a topic about Tsaritsyno sightseeings. Thank you in advance.
Olga.

In architecture of Tsaritsyno ansamble one can see mixture of different styles: gothic arches, classical colonades and renaissance windows. This constructions were filled with innumerable cultural associations, simbols and secrets known just by a narrow circle of enlightened elite.

In 18th century the residence wasn't complited the pacace's and pavillion's walls inside were not painted or decorated.No interiors... but splendid architecture have been preserved since that time.

The Palace, the main building of the estste, had been delapidating for two centuries. In 2005-2007 it was rennovated as a museum that hosts the visitors from all over the world.

Inside the museum there are specious exhibition area, sumptuous ceremonial rooms and concert halls. We are going to see the real highlights of this place.

Right now we are standing right in the middle of the building near the front case. The traditional materials were used by modern designers to decorate this interior: gold and marble, cristal and mirrors. The last one create an illusion of space here. An endless corridor can be seen seen if you look through them. That is how our musem looks now. In archeological hall there is a model of the Grand Palace before rennovations. Lets have a look at it.

I also need grammar correction of the following phrase.

We highly appriciate your contribution in preserving our museum heritage.

Many thanks,

Olga.

[Jamie (K)]

Olga, before you ask people to correct the grammar, I'd suggest just spellchecking the paragraph first. You'll catch a lot of mistakes that way.

[Dianova Olga]

Jamie,Thank you for your advice.

In architecture of Tsaritsyno ensemble one can see mixture of different styles: gothic arches, classical colonnades and renaissance windows. These constructions were filled with innumerable cultural associations, symbols and secrets known just by a narrow circle of enlightened elite.

In 18th century the residence wasn't completed the palace’s and pavilions’ walls inside were not painted or decorated. No interiors... but splendid architecture have been preserved since that time.

The Palace, the main building of the estate, had been dilapidating for two centuries. In 2005-2007 it was renovated as a museum that hosts the visitors from all over the world.

Inside the museum there are specious exhibition area, sumptuous ceremonial rooms and concert halls. We are going to see the real highlights of this place.

Right now we are standing right in the middle of the building near the front case. The traditional materials were used by modern designers to decorate this interior: gold and marble, crystal and mirrors. The last one creates an illusion of space here. An endless corridor can be seen if you look through them. That is how our museum looks now. In archeological hall there is a model of the Grand Palace before renovations. Let’s have a look at it.

I also need grammar correction of the following phrase.

We highly appreciate your contribution in preserving our museum heritage.

Many thanks,

Olga.

[Dianova Olga]

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Dear teachers, thank you for your lesson. I will be grateful for your reply.

In architecture of Tsaritsyno ensemble one can see mixture of different styles: gothic arches, classical colonnades and renaissance windows. These constructions were filled with innumerable cultural associations, symbols and secrets known just by a narrow circle of enlightened elite.

In 18th century the residence wasn't completed the palace’s and pavilions’ walls inside were not painted or decorated. No interiors... but splendid architecture have been preserved since that time.

The Palace, the main building of the estate, had been dilapidating for two centuries. In 2005-2007 it was renovated as a museum that hosts the visitors from all over the world.

Inside the museum there are specious exhibition area, sumptuous ceremonial rooms and concert halls. We are going to see the real highlights of this place.

Right now we are standing right in the middle of the building near the front case. The traditional materials were used by modern designers to decorate this interior: gold and marble, crystal and mirrors. The last one creates an illusion of space here. An endless corridor can be seen if you look through them. That is how our museum looks now. In archeological hall there is a model of the Grand Palace before renovations. Let’s have a look at it.

I also need grammar correction of the following phrase.

We highly appreciate your contribution in preserving our museum heritage.

Many thanks,

Olga.