#2 (permalink) Sun Jul 25, 2010 15:03 pm The Best Age To Get Married |
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Some people prefer to marry when they are young while others prefer to wait until they are older to marry. Discuss the advantage of each position. Then indicate which you think is the better and why.
In the ancient timeS, people married at a very young age due the traditional beliefS. This is so WAS called AN arranged marriage. It was commonly practiced IN many countries such as India and Pakistan. However, in this day and age the role of lives HAVE changed. People tend to marry according to their maturity status. As for me, I would prefer to marry at an old age in to order to seek a better future prospect.
There are many advantages IN BEING MARRIED YOUNG.young age married . The first and foremost would be the ability of conceiving A child. In fact, people who get married at young AGES often have more chanceS to get pregnant. Similarly, many teenagers often think that raising the children is an easy task. I would say that what they have conceived may be different from the reality. When people get marrIED AT AN early age, they will become more mature. In MOST CASES, we can see that people usually change their lifestyle after getting married, such as they tend TO become more responsible as compared to IN the past. Also, they will experience the married life, in caseS WHERE one partner can get along well with THE OTHER. They will have a chance to remarry. Moreover, it is possible to enjoy married life and to continue working at the same time.
On the other hand, getting married AT A later age tendS to OFFER more career prospectS, such as it is easy for people to change theIR jobS or to move from one place to another. People usually have different choiceS AFTER getting married. Some people prefer to work until they reach the peak of their careerS, AND then get married, while other people like spend their LIVES without any obligationS. These people believe in the same fact that ‘there is no age limit of marriage’. Furthermore, to get married at AN older age is not always bad, as two partners can get to know more about each other. A good illustratION of this is proved by people aged 30s WHO are able make the right decision and deal with different issues, because they HAVE already reached the maturity stage. Likewise, family problems are unlikely TO occur due to the understanding that each partner has for his loved one. As a consequence, there will be less chance for them to get divorceD. Eventually, they end up having happILY married lives.
To recapitulate, marriage is the MOST important part of our lives. Without a thorough consideration, people could face many problems in their married lives. Therefore, I believe age is not the matter to determine whether people should get married or not. But m Maturity and nobility BOTH play a crucial role in theIR future LIVES. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Xamba, listen to me ... the more you read, the better you will become, believe me!
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#3 (permalink) Sun Jul 25, 2010 16:54 pm The Best Age To Get Married |
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