please help me!

Nguyenngoc.thoi · #1 (permalink) Mon Jul 26, 2010 19:19 pm *please help me!*

i want to send a birthday message to my friend, but i am not sure how to create correctly. please help me.
my message.
"have a day as special as you are. wishing that you always happy and success in your life."
many thanks!

Beeesneees · #2 (permalink) Mon Jul 26, 2010 19:35 pm *please help me!*

Have a day as special as you are. Wishing you happiness and success throughout your life.
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Cheers m' dears!

Nguyenngoc.thoi · #3 (permalink) Mon Jul 26, 2010 19:44 pm *please help me!*

thanks for your help!
is this correct?
"have a day that is as special as you are.wishing you happiness and success throughout your life"

Beeesneees · #4 (permalink) Mon Jul 26, 2010 20:08 pm *please help me!*

It would be if it were correctly punctuated:
Have a day that is as special as you are. Wishing you happiness and success throughout your life.
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Cheers m' dears!

Nguyenngoc.thoi · #5 (permalink) Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:10 am *please help me!*

is this sentence correct?
"Wishing that you are always happy and successful throughout your life."

Beeesneees · #6 (permalink) Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:52 am *please help me!*

It doesn't flow as well as the previous ones. It sounds slightly 'off'.
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Cheers m' dears!

Tofu · #7 (permalink) Tue Jul 27, 2010 9:22 am *please help me!*

Nguyenngoc.thoi,

I wish your friend a happy birthday.

Nguyenngoc.thoi · #8 (permalink) Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:49 am *please help me!*

woa, i like it. thank Tofu!

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