| #2 (permalink) Tue Jul 27, 2010 6:52 am it is better not to tell the truth
|Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Sometimes it is better not to tell the truth. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Truth plays an important part in the lives of many people. Truth refers to honest between people. It makes life more beautiful and lovely. Some people believe that it is better not to tell the truth; other disagree. In my view, telling THE truth is better than not telling the truth for two important reasons.
The main reason is that truth distinguishes between good friends and bad friends. The good friend always tells the truth to her/his friends and DOES not hide it. He or she does not lie about the truth because she or he loves them. If the friend saw you do anything bad or good, she or he will tell you immediately(,) otherwise, if the bad friend saw anything bad or good, she or he will not tell you anything but he or she will laugh behind youR BACK. For example, in the past, I had three friends and we always played and went to school together. ONE day, we WERE INVITED to the party of our partner in the class(,) So we met each other in my house, wore beautiful dresses and nice shoes and put ON make-up. Then we went to the party together. By the time we ate the cakes, my dress was dirty without MY knewING.
So two of mMy TWO friends saw that and laughed at me, but the another one saw that and told me. Therefore, I discovered who was my real friend and FROM this event in the partY until now, she is my best friend. Moreover, telling the truth is distinguished between GOOD AND BAD FRIENDS. the good friends and the bad friends.
another OTHER reason is that truth sometimes opens person's eyes about the facts he or she does not know about THEIR FRIENDS. There are many facts that people do not see them because they are busy. Some people do many mistakes in theIR life that they MISTAKENLY think they are good, but in fact ARE NOT. These mistakes are MADE because some people are uneducated or TOO busy and they thinkING ABOUT other things. For example, when I studied in the university, I was very busy and I had many exams and assignments. Every day I came to my house, I said hello to my mother and I went to my room and slept. Then I woke up and studied and wrote my homework until midnight. After that, I slept and woke up in the morning to GO to my university. ONE day, my sister came to me and told me that my mother was very sick, and she was very sad because I did not sit with her . After this, I always sAt with my mother after I came HOME from university. I said to her good night every day and asked about her health. My sister HAD openED my eyes TO the truth that my mother missed me and she was very sad because I did not take care of her. Furthermore, telling THE truth always open people's eyes about that fact that they do not see it.
In conclusion, though some people believe that it better not to tell the truth, I believe that telling truth is better than not telling. In addition, truth distinguishes between the good friends and the bad friends, and sometimes opens PEOPLE'S eyes about the fact he or she does not see it. Every person should tell the truth to each other.
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| #3 (permalink) Tue Jul 27, 2010 16:04 pm it is better not to tell the truth
There many mistakes in passive voice and verb phrase.
telling THE truth
and DOES not
laugh behind youR BACK.
we WERE INVITED to the party
the class(,) So we
put ON make-up.
my dress was dirty without MY knewING.
So two of My TWO friends
FROM this event in the partY
GOOD AND BAD FRIENDS.the good friends and the bad friends.
The another OTHER
do many mistakes in theIR life
they MISTAKENLY think they are good thing,
but in fact ARE NOT. they are bad things
These mistakes are MADE
they are thinkING ABOUT in other things.
woke up in the morning to GO went to my university.
I always sAt with
I came HOME
So My sister HAD openED my eyes TO about the truth
opens PEOPLE'S eyes about
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