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River deep, moutain high?



 
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River deep, moutain high? #1 (permalink) Mon Aug 02, 2010 7:35 am   River deep, moutain high?
 

Hi, teachers
River deep, mountain high, It is song title. It should be "deep river, high mountain", Could you explain me why ? is it ungrammatical ?
Some one told me, the songs are not tight for the grammar but they are the good way to verify your grammar :-).
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River deep, moutain high? #2 (permalink) Mon Aug 02, 2010 9:53 am   River deep, moutain high?
 

Hi Waiyin,

It is written like that because that is the rhythm the composer /lyricist wanted to match.
The person who gave you that advice is correct. Songs, like poetry, are not a good source of correct grammar. If you wish to verify your grammar you would be better off using articles and stories.
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River deep, moutain high? #3 (permalink) Mon Aug 02, 2010 11:25 am   River deep, moutain high?
 

Thanks for your help, Beeesnees. Sometimes, The way they write the titles for press are not grammatical too. I read a book, they said about the title (not the content) for the news have been written in some way that we cannot verify them by grammar.
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River deep, moutain high? #4 (permalink) Mon Aug 02, 2010 13:07 pm   River deep, moutain high?
 

"Deep river, high mountain" would be more grammatical but would also alter the meaning.

The most grammatical way to preserve the meaning would be "as deep as a river and as high as a mountain." These are metaphors.
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River deep, moutain high? #5 (permalink) Mon Aug 02, 2010 14:03 pm   River deep, moutain high?
 

Waiyin Cheng wrote:
Thanks for your help, Beeesnees. Sometimes, The way they write the titles for press are not grammatical too. I read a book, they said about the title (not the content) for the news have been written in some way that we cannot verify them by grammar.


New titles are most commonly called 'headlines' and they are almost never grammatically correct.
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River deep, moutain high? #6 (permalink) Mon Aug 02, 2010 14:08 pm   River deep, moutain high?
 

Lol at Bees' comment on headlines. A bit harsh.
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