impact of movies on youth...

[Bhavya11]

Movies are created to provide refreshment and recreation to people.Not only for recreation,they create awareness about happenings in our surroundings.But now a days movies had a great impact on not only youth but also on children.Impact mainly depends on us,any movie will have bad and good and it is ourselves should able to distinguish between them.If we take positive things in a movie we definitely have a positive impact.Now a days,creation of movie become completely commercial,no body is thinking of the society they thinking only about money.There are also movies that make us to wake up.on the other hand film industry is giving livelihood to many artists,technicians etc.coming to the point of youth,youth is a part of life where we get much to enjoy.In any stage of life , we do not have that much power and enthusiasm and also time to watch movies.youth as a grown ups,they should make themselves to grasp good things in a movie.Movies has a power to make the world and break the world.

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TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor of Art History

[Kitosdad]

Movies are created to provide refreshment and recreation /to/FOR/ people.Not only for recreation, they create awareness about happenings in our surroundings(,) but (nowadays) movies HAVE a great impact on not only youth but also on children. Impact mainly depends on us(.) Any movie will have bad and good ELEMENTS and it is ourselves WHO should BE able to distinguish between them. If we take positive things in a movie we definitely have a positive impact. (Nowadays) THE creation of movieS HAS become completely commercial(.) (Nobody) is thinking of the society(.) They ARE thinking only about money. There are also movies that make us to wake up. On the other hand THE film industry is giving A livelihood to many artistEs,technicians etc.
Coming to the point of youth, youth is a part of life where we get much to enjoy. In any stage of life we do not have that much power and enthusiasm and also time to watch movies.
Youth as grown ups, they should make themselves to grasp good things in a movie. Movies HAVE THE power to make the world OR break the world.
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You have more important things to worry about than synonyms my friend.

Sentence structure.
Basic English grammar ... which I have corrected here.
Punctuation ... which I have corrected here.

That should keep you busy for a few hours. Forget synonyms for the moment.

Kitos. 7/10
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