isolation or collaboration

[Bk1607]

Topic: Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
Countries should not isolate themselves from the world, but instead engage other countries

These days, the international cooperation is becoming the survival matter of all countries. Isolation might have the same meaning of suicide. Therefore, I am in favour of the opinion that countries should not isolate themselves from the world

In the fast-changing world, there are many global problem which need unity of all countries around the world to handle them. Actually, it might stated that the today’s world is becoming more unpredictable. The world now is full of issues that require the collaboration of many countries and the world community to control and deal with. Some noticeable problems such as political matters, natural disasters, war fares, smuggle, piracy and global warming are mostly concerned. These problems need a greatly large amounts of money, human and substantial basis of modern technology that no country can resolve them alone, even some superpower nations. Therefore, instead of isolate themselves, countries should engage with others to develop themselves and also help each other

In addition to the solving macro problems, the national cooperation is the indispensableness of the development of the world economics, technology and science. The today’s world is becoming closer and flatter than ever before. The more progressive the world develop, the more complicated and reciprocal the world economics is. The world economics is the complex web that contain all of national economics , ,and these national economics are interrelated and depend on each other. For example, the financial crisis of the United States in 2008 have an enormously impact on the world economics and also on every country around the world. On the other hand, the international collaboration is also necessary on science and technology. For instance, the scientists from many countries have cooperated to study in the human genetics aspect; and they declared their achievement in the map of human gene in 2000.

Although there are many contradictions and divergence between many countries, the international collaboration is very important to every country in particular and the human race in general

TOEFL listening discussions: What are the two students doing?

[Kitosdad]

Topic: Do you agree or disagree with following statement?
Countries should not isolate themselves from the world, but instead engage other countries

These days, the international cooperation is becoming the survival matter of all countries. Isolation might have the same meaning AS suicide. Therefore, I am in favour of the opinion that countries should not isolate themselves from the world

In the fast-changing world, there are many global problemS which need unity of all countries around the world to handle them. Actually, it might BE stated that the today’s world is becoming more unpredictable. The world now is full of issues that require the collaboration of many countries and the world community to control and deal with.

Some noticeable problems such as political matters, natural disasters, war-fares, smugglING, piracy and global warming are mostly INVOLVED. These problems need a greatly large amounts of money, human and substantial basis of modern technology that no country can resolve them alone, even some superpower nations. Therefore, instead of isolatING themselves, countries should engage with others to develop themselves and also help each other

In addition to the solving OF macro problems, the national cooperation is the ESSENTIAL ELEMENT IN the development of the world economics, technology and science. The today’s world is becoming closer and fatter than ever before. The more progressive the world developS, the more complicated and reciprocal the world economics ARE. The world economics is A complex web that contain all of national economics, and these national economics are interrelated and depend on each other. For example, the financial crisis of the United States in 2008 HAD an enormous impact on the world economics and also on every country around the world. On the other hand, the international collaboration is also necessary on science and technology. For instance, the scientist from many countries have cooperated to study in the human genetics aspect; and they declared their achievement in the mapPING of human geneS in 2000.

Although there are many contradictions and divergenceS between many countries, the international collaboration is very important to every country in particular and the human race in general
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This topic was a little too complex for you Bk, but you did very well.

Kitos. 8/10
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[Bk1607]

Thank you, Mr.Kitos
Actually, I'm little bit confusing about the articles