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#1 (permalink) Sun Aug 08, 2010 17:10 pm Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that wou |
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I feel it like a mess :).
Topic: letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that would destroy the friendship. It is no doubt that a close friend not only has much in common with us, but also always places a considerable role in every life in terms of emotional and spiritual. Therefore, I am of the opinion that we should intervene when our friend makes a mistake even if it could ruin the relationship in order to give them better things. The first reason for my choice is that the mistake may turn out to be fatal to some extent to the friend. Many contend these mistakes are just inconsiderable ones, which have no severe influence on the friend’s life. However, no one can predict what happens next. Some habits, though regarded as innocuous ones, might contribute to the serious cases such as car accident because the driver takes his phone. Hence, some gentle reminders from our friends are one way to avoid these risks. In other words, a true friend is a person who holds the charge to make the betterment of their partner’s life. In addition, you might lose the faith in your friend’s thought about you or even your friend can get disappointed in you later, if you do not anything when your friend gets mistakes. In this case, your friend has the potential to attribute their mistake to your no concern because, in my opinion, everybody has a responsibility to stand by and help their friends out of problems when it happens. On the other hand, your friend may highly appreciate your help, no matter what or how you do, when being in need. For example, this year saw the reduction in revenue of my friend’s company because his financial investment was conducted by the wrong way. With my experiences, I showed him what was wrong frankly, as well as told how to fix problems more expeditiously. Far from lessening my friendship by giving a bitter advice, this action, actually, make us closer than ever before. Although many people deem that any serious intervention in our friend’s important business can worsen our relationship, I would rather show my friend’s mistakes than let him deal with lethal problems or even lose his belief.
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Lemin1991 You can meet me at english-test.net
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#2 (permalink) Sun Aug 08, 2010 20:17 pm Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that |
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I feel it like a mess :).
Topic: letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that would destroy the friendship.
It THERE is no doubt that a close friend not only has much in common with us, but also always PLAYS a considerable role in every life in terms of emotional and spiritual. Therefore, I am of the opinion that we should intervene when our friend makes a mistake even if it could ruin the relationship in order to give them better things. The first reason for my choice is that the mistake may turn out to be fatal to some extent to the friend. Many contend these mistakes are just inconsiderable ones, which have no severe influence on the friend’s life. However, no one can predict what happens next. Some habits, though regarded as innocuous ones, might contribute to the serious cases such as A car accident because the driver TALKS ON his phone. Hence, some gentle reminders from our friends are one way to avoid these risks. In other words, a true friend is a person who holds the RESPONSIBILITY to make the betterment of their partner’s life. In addition, you might lose the faith in your friend’s thought about you or even your friend can get disappointed in you later, if you do not anything when your friend gets mistakes. In this case, your friend has the potential to attribute their mistake to your LACK OF concern because, in my opinion, everybody has a responsibility to stand UP and help their friends out of problems when THEY OCCUR. On the other hand, your friend may highly appreciate your help, no matter what or how you do, when being in need. For example, this year saw the reduction in revenue of my friend’s company because his financial investment was conducted IN the wrong way. With my experiences, I showed him what was wrong frankly, as well as told how to fix problems more expeditiously. Far from lessening my friendship by giving a bitter advice, this action actually MADE us closer than ever before. Although many people deem that any serious intervention in our friend’s important business can worsen our relationship, I would rather show my friend’s HIS mistakes than let him deal with lethal problems or even lose his belief IN ME. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: A surprisingly good essay Lemin. You are indeed a good friend.
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#3 (permalink) Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:59 am Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that wou |
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| A surprisingly sweet comment, too. Thank you very much!!! |
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Lemin1991 You can meet me at english-test.net
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#4 (permalink) Mon Aug 09, 2010 11:20 am Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that |
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| Kitosdad wrote: |
I feel it like a mess :).
Topic: letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that would destroy the friendship.
It THERE is no doubt that a close friend not only HAVE much in common with us, but also always places a considerable role in every life in terms of emotional and spiritual. Therefore, I am of the opinion that we should intervene when our friend makes a mistake even if it could ruin the relationship in order to give them better things. The first reason for my choice is that the mistake may turn out to be fatal to some extent to the friend. Many contend these mistakes are just inconsiderable ones, which have no severe influence on the friend’s life. However, no one can predict what happens next. Some habits, though regarded as innocuous ones, might contribute to the serious cases such as A car accident because the driver TALKS ON his phone. Hence, some gentle reminders from our friends are one way to avoid these risks. In other words, a true friend is a person who holds the RESPONSIBILITY to make the betterment of their partner’s life. In addition, you might lose the faith in your friend’s thought about you or even your friend can get disappointed in you later, if you do not DO anything when your friend gets mistakes. In this case, your friend has the potential to attribute their mistake to your LACK OF concern because, in my opinion, everybody has a responsibility to stand UP and help their friends out of problems when THEY OCCUR. On the other hand, your friend may highly appreciate your help, no matter what or how you do, when being in need. For example, this year saw the reduction in revenue of my friend’s company because his financial investment was conducted IN the wrong way. With my experiences, I showed him what was wrong frankly, as well as told how to fix problems more expeditiously. Far from lessening my friendship by giving a bitter advice, this action actually MADE us closer than ever before. Although many people deem that any serious intervention in our friend’s important business can worsen our relationship, I would rather show my friend’s HIS mistakes than let him deal with lethal problems or even lose his belief IN ME. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: A surprisingly good essay Lemin. You are indeed a good friend.
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#5 (permalink) Mon Aug 09, 2010 16:10 pm Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that wou |
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| I have a question, kitos. Why don't you use "charge" ? I think it is similar to "responsibility". |
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Lemin1991 You can meet me at english-test.net
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#6 (permalink) Mon Aug 09, 2010 16:32 pm Letting a friend make a mistake is better than saying or doing something that wou |
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Because he feel himself responsible for any mistake his friend may commit. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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