my first topic, an introduction about me

[Kiranmayireddy]

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hello every one. this is kiranmayi from India. im new to this forum i joined last week. im very bad at English , im trying to learn from u guys and thank u so much kitosdad for his suggestions and hope i will learn more from u it was a pleasure to be here in this forum thank u.

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Hello and welcome to the forums.

As this service is intended to improve all aspects of English grammar, please don't use 'text' shortcut conventions in your writing. Use capital letters and punctuation marks where they should be used and don't type 'u' when you mean 'you'.

This will stop you getting into bad habits (particularly if you are preparing for an exam) and help us to recognise where you need support.

Thanks.

By the way, there is no sound on your recording. Do you have a properly connected microphone?
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[Alan]

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Hello,

I would very much like to hear your recording but I'm afraid it didn't work. Just some points on what you have written:

Don't write 'i', write 'I'
Don't write 'u', write 'You'
Don't write 'im', write 'I'm'.

Try recording again.

Alan
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