why people attend college or university?

[Parisa65]

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More and more people attend college or university for some identifiable reasons. In fact, day by day, unbelievably, there is a significant and exponential growth in the number of students who attend universities and it is for several causes that I mention below.
First of all is that going to university burgeon our knowledge; so , it creates better chances for getting high level jobs with high payment. Hence, they have a better life with more facilities. In societies, educated people are greatly valuable and other people respect them.
Secondly, engaging in studying and being with other students has some beneficial advantages. One of them is that learning some social skills before entering the society which is very vital and essential is gained by attending college; for instance, having a great social relationship comes from of being with friends who are at our age and professors who are morally in highest level of society. In addition, we can get self confidence inside the atmosphere of university because in some cases; for example, you should take part in a conference to have a lecture about something; hence, you need to boost your self confidence to do your duty in the best way.
In conclusion, the more, people become aware about the advantages of studying in universities, the more students are absorbed to the universities; due to the fact that each person wants to get a high level at the society by having a high education and an appropriate career.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from a social science class (2)

[Kitosdad]

At first thanks a lot for your effective helpings

More and more people attend college or university for some identifiable reasons. In fact, day by day, unbelievably, there is a significant and exponential growth in the number of students who attend universities and it is for several causes that I mention below.
First of all is that going to university burgeon our knowledge; so , it creates better chances for getting high level jobs with /high payment/LUCRATIVE SALARIES/. Hence, they have a better life with more facilities. In societies, educated people are greatly valuED and other people respect them.

Secondly, engaging in studying and being with other students has some beneficial advantages. One of them is that learning some social skills before entering the society which is very IMPORTANT, vital and essential is gained by attending college; for instance, having a great social relationship comes from of being with friends who are at our age ARE THE SAME AGE AS OURSELVES, and professors who are morally AMONG THE highest level of society. In addition, we can GAIN self confidence inside the atmosphere of A university(,) because in some cases; for example, you should take part in a conference AND MAY HAVE TO GIVE a lecture about something; hence, you need to boost your self confidence to do your duty in the best way.

In conclusion, the more, people become aware about the advantages of studying in universities, the more students are absorbed to the universities; due to the fact that each person wants to GAIN a highER level IN society by having a high education and an appropriate career.
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