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When people succeed, it is because of hard working, luck has nothing to do... #1 (permalink) Tue Aug 17, 2010 18:31 pm   When people succeed, it is because of hard working, luck has nothing to do...
 

Topic: When people succeed, it is because of hard working, luck has nothing to do with success.Do you agree or disagree?
Essay:

How luck contribute to the success of people is a fascinating question. Although some people think that luck cannot replace hard working to lead people to become success, I completely agree with the opinion that luck is a necessary factor of success. Because luck may help people to be rich and famous, and it has helped scientists invent a lot of new things.

To begin with, a little luck may turn people to be rich and famous. Obviously, there are vast of people work very hard and carefully every day, but the number of successful people are so small. That means not only hard working make success, and luck can make the difference between people. For example, two actors may work very hard, and practice everyday; however, they cannot become famous because they always are set up minor characters from directors in the movies. Then one day, a director gives one of them a chance to become main character, and she does it well; as a result, thanks to luck, she becomes famous, but another actor is not.

In addition, there are many inventions was found by luck. The history of science admits some incidents have led scientists to discover the new things that is helpful for people. For instance, a thousands people would have died every years if luck did not help professor Flemming to discovery Penicillin. This is an interesting invention, through an accidental event in laboratory, he found a new kind of medicine that can treat numerous of diseases.consequently, luck did not only help Flemming to be famous, but it also helped to save a lot of lives in the world.

In conclusion, can someone become successful or not? it depends on their abilities, hard working and luck. For all of reasons that I mention above, I believe that luck is significant element of success, and people need luck to success and invent the new things. Although people can do it without luck, it will become more difficult and consume a lot of time. Luck may bring us the faster way to the success.

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When people succeed, it is because of hard working, luck has nothing to do... #2 (permalink) Tue Aug 17, 2010 19:23 pm   When people succeed, it is because of hard working, luck has nothing to do...
 

Topic: When people succeed, it is because of hard working, luck has nothing to do with success.Do you agree or disagree?
Essay:

How luck contributeS to the success of people is a fascinating question. Although some people think that luck cannot replace hard WORK to lead people to become success, I completely agree with the opinion that luck is a necessary factor of success. Because luck may help people to be rich and famous, and it has helped scientists invent a lot of new things.

To begin with, a little luck may turn people to be rich and famous. Obviously, there are vast of people work very hard and carefully every day, but the number of successful people are so small. That means not only hard working make success, and luck can make the difference between people. For example, two actors may work very hard, and practice everyday; however, they cannot become famous because they always are set up minor characters from directors in the movies. Then one day, a director gives one of them a chance to become main character, and she does it well; as a result, thanks to luck, she becomes famous, but another actor is not.

In addition, there are many inventions was found by luck. The history of science admits some incidents have led scientists to discover the new things that is helpful for people. For instance, a thousands people would have died every years if luck did not help professor Flemming to discovery Penicillin. This is an interesting invention, through an accidental event in laboratory, he found a new kind of medicine that can treat numerous of diseases.consequently, luck did not only help Flemming to be famous, but it also helped to save a lot of lives in the world.

In conclusion, can someone become successful or not? it depends on their abilities, hard working and luck. For all of reasons that I mention above, I believe that luck is significant element of success, and people need luck to success and invent the new things. Although people can do it without luck, it will become more difficult and consume a lot of time. Luck may bring us the faster way to the success.
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Sorry TL, but this is very poor. Another example of a poor reader being a poor writer. If you don't read well, then you will never write well. Do more reading.

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