Please rate my essy. (Thank you very much in advance)

[Svyatoslavkn]

It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. Compare the contributions of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society. Which type of contribution do you think is more valued by your society? Give specific reasons to support your answer.

All professions in the world are very important and irreplaceable. Scientists every day make enormous effort to improve science and surrounding world. At the same time, artists support the national identity of our country. However, the contribution of scientists outweighs positive role of artists because the scientists are the people who make our country much more recognisable around the world.

Obviously, every technical device and exploration is product of science. These achievements are result of enormous struggle of scientists. According to the National Scientific Guide, during this century the number of deaths among young people decreased by 20 percent and this incredible result is reached by new medical technologies.

Modern art is also significant part of our society because it supports and keeps our culture and customs. Traditional pattern of painting art can be the thing which will help foreign people to understand our national identity. For example, the picture of Vasil Levski is the most famous painting for overseas tourists and visiting our state they always want to see it.

However, from my point of view scientists make more contributions for society because they make the inventions which are used in the whole world and the foreign countries know our state by these achievements. For instance, according to the research in the world our country is associated with the name of Niels Bohr.

Scientist and artists are very important and beneficial professions because these occupations can improve our science or save national culture. However, contribution of scientists is more valuable because it makes our country more respectable in the world.

TOEFL listening lectures: Who are not included as members of the Underground Railroad?

[Kitosdad]

It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. Compare the contributions of artists to society with the contributions of scientists to society. Which type of contribution do you think is more valued by your society? Give specific reasons to support your answer.

All professions in the world are very important and irreplaceable. Scientists
Every day scientistsmake enormous effortS to improve science and THE surrounding world. At the same time, artists support the national identity of our country. However, the contribution of scientists outweighs positiveLY outweigh THE role of artists because the scientists are the people who make our country much more recognisable around the world. (How?)

Obviously, every technical device and exploration is A product of science. These achievements are THE result of THE enormous /struggle/EFFORTS/ of scientists. According to the National Scientific Guide, during this century the number of NATURAL deaths among young people HAS decreased by 20 percent(,) and this incredible result /is reached/HAS BEEN ACHIEVED/ by new medical technologies.

Modern art also HAS A significant ROLE IN our society because it supports and keeps our culture and customs. Traditional patternS of painting AND OTHERS art can be the thing which will help foreign people to understand our national identity. For example, the picture of Vasil Levski is the most famous painting for ATTRACTING THE ATTENTION OF overseas tourists and visitORS TO our state they always want to see it.

However, from my point of view scientists make more contributions TO society because they make the inventions which are used in the whole world(,) and the foreign countries know our state by these achievements. For instance, according to research in the world our country is associated with the name of Niels Bohr.

Scientist and artists are very important and beneficial professions because these occupations can improve our science or save national culture. However, THE contribution of scientists is more valuable because it makes our country more respectable in the world.
::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
Not bad Svyatoslavkn but I think it was a bit limited in content. I don't think the topic was confined to your country alone, but to the entire world.

Kitos. 7/10
_________________
Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Hengame]

Please activate Javascript in your browser to listen to this audio recording

7 Listened

Download mp3	Click to listen

Leaders like John F. Kennedy and Martin Luther King have made important contributions to the people of the U.S. Name another world leader you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
This is my writting:
An Important Leader
Some leaders not only were important but also had positive effects on the history and the future of a country or even of the world, like Martin Luther or Mahatma Gandhi. Some other leaders are important, but their life, ideas and also their existence were negative. Adolph Hitler was one of the members of the second group of leaders.

The importance of Adolph Hitler as a German leader in the World War II is for his ill thoughts that cause the death of thousands of men, women and children. Those young children, who thought that they are being killed for their country, were sent to kill “non-German” people. His sinister ideas killed so many people and destroyed so many houses and lives and ruined so many inventive brains. Hitler could successfully persuade Germans that they are the best in the world and other countries must obey them. The effects of his ill thoughts can still be founds nowadays.

Adolph Hitler was a simple soldier that it is now proved that he had some mental problems. In my opinion, this mental problem caused him to be such an effective person in the 19th century. In addition to his mental problems, he had a kind of sexual problem, masochism. Power of politics with these illnesses surely leads to this wicked monster. Undoubtedly, he is the most effective and important leader in the World War II.

Hitler was talented I think, but he used his talent in an inappropriate way of life. Perhaps other situations or conditions in his life could make him an important positive leader.