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Please comment on my issue!1 #1 (permalink) Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:42 am   Please comment on my issue!1
 

"The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds"

Machines are made by human minds depending upon their needs. Although, machines are human tools and work as per instructions fed in them by human mind, however, they work more efficiently and effectively than human beings. In today's world, human are dependent upon machines and also machines need human mind for getting manufactured and instructions.

Machines have been fulfilling needs of people over the years. Every machine manufactured in the world has made life of human more simpler than what it used to be before that machine got manufactured. For example, invention of computer, mobile phones, televisions, automobiles and many other gadgets have made life of people easy and entertaining. Many years ago, when computer didn't exist, people used to write documents on paper and keep them in a file, generating a pile of files. This practice used to take more time and also space for storage. but, nowadays, things have become simpler due to computer, as data are being stored in hard drive which is simple in handling and requires less space due to small size. similarly, automobiles can take people from one place to other in short time rather than hours and hours on foot. Due to mobile phones, communication have become easy and messages can be sent through mobile phones in a minute what used to take an hour before its invention. All these gadgets are work more efficiently than human beings, however their existence in this world is due to human mind.

Machines have become more efficient in today's world. Take an example of a hot strip mill, which produces steel strips for automobiles, cans etc. If we compare the steel strip making process of years back in 1980s and now, a drastic increase in machine efficiency has taken place, leading to much higher production what it used to be 1980s. The increase in production and therefore more profit for the company has become possible only because of increased efficiency of machines. This increase in efficiency of machines became possible only due to human mind. The efficiency of particular machine cannot increase on its own. It requires some analysis from human side. So, although, machines helped in increasing production, but, only after application of human mind.

However, fields in which human have completely subdued machines are ability to think and work with emotions. Machine can not think and work accordingly. If a computer gets attacked by virus, which are also made by human, it cannot remove the virus on its own and requires human intervention. automobiles can take us from different places, but the destination would be decided by human and not machines. For an example, an automobile can kill an animal or human without emotions, however human would think more than hundred times to perform the same act.

Although machines are tools of human minds as can be seen from above examples, but, can we survive in this world without machine? In my opinion, human need machine day in and day out to complete their work efficiently leading to save in time and hard work.

In conclusion, In today's scenario, both machines and human mind are dependent on each other. Human use their mind to make machines depending on their needs and machines work accordingly to fulfill those needs. As machine cannot be manufactured and run without the help of human mind, similarly, human beings cannot be satisfied with their needs without machines.
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