going to school is required or optional

[Ngoc_Hai252]

Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea that attending class is required while other think that it should be optional. From my point of view, students should attend class because it will help them gain more knowledge and improve personal skills.

The main reason for my propensity is that when going to school students will have an opportunity to gain a lot of knowledge. For example, at school students can learn many kinds of subjects including mathematics, physics, literature and chemistry. All of the curricula at school are scientifically designed by educational professors. Moreover, at school students are able to interact with many teachers who will help them find the best ways to study. In class, teacher often share their knowledge about their daily life; therefore, students will have a wide range of knowledge.

Another equally important reason is that students are liable to improve their skills. For instance, nowadays almost schools have developed teamwork to make student more co-operative. When studying in group, students will have better communication skills. They will have to adjust themselves in order to work with other members who have different lifestyles and working methods. In addition, they will enhance the management skill. They will have to assign the jobs to appropriate member in the group. Indeed, going to school is really beneficial.

In a word, although that going to school is optional may have some advantages such as saving time and money, the advantages of going to school definitely outweigh. Going to school bring student more valuable knowledge, and more helpful skills. If these factors are considered, we can come to the conclusion that going to school is more advantageous.

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[Kitosdad]

Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea that attending class is required(,) while otherS think that it should be optional. From my point of view, students should attend class because it will help them gain more knowledge and improve personal skills.

The main reason for my propensity is that when going to school students will have an opportunity to gain a lot of knowledge. For example, at school students can learn many kinds of subjects including mathematics, physics, literature and chemistry. All of the curricula at schoolS are scientifically designed by educational professors. Moreover, at school students are able to interact with many teachers who will help them find the best ways to study. In class, teacherS often share their knowledge about their daily life; therefore, students will have a wide range of knowledge.

Another equally important reason is that students are liable to improve their skills. For instance, nowadays almost schools have developed teamwork to make student more co-operative. When studying in groupS students will have better communication skills. They will have to adjust themselves in order to work with other members who have different lifestyles and working methods. In addition, they will enhance the management skill. They will have to assign the jobs to appropriate memberS in the group. Indeed, going to school is really beneficial.

In a word, although that going to school is optional IT may have some advantages such as saving time and money, the advantages of going to school definitely outweigh THE DISADVANTAGES. Going to school bringS studentS more valuable knowledge, and more helpful skills. If these factors are considered, we can come to the conclusion that going to school is more advantageous.
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Nice work Ngoc_Hai.

Kitos. 8.5/10
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