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my first ISSUE--103"The study of history has value only to the extent that #1 (permalink) Sat Sep 04, 2010 15:07 pm   my first ISSUE--103"The study of history has value only to the extent that
 

TOPIC: ISSUE103 - "The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."
WORDS: 642 TIME: 01:24:22 DATE: 2010/9/4 21:53:05
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Has the study history value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives? I am strong disagreeing with it. We study the history, because we want to review the condition and the situation about the history. Moreover, we can use the experiment of history to avoid or solve the problem that we meet in the modern time.

First of all, on the one hand, as we all know, the history of human that is the feudal society or slave society. What is more, in this a history society, the ruler has the power to decide what should be record and what should be not. In another word, the record of history that today we study has much more respect to describe the live of the ruler, the outstanding individual or the breaking news which ruler considered more valuable. However, if we only to study the history's daily lives, we cannot review the condition and the situation about the history. For instance, the most famous opus "SHI JI" in China, in this book that only describe the outstanding individual such as King of Zhou Wu, so that if we want to study the history through this book, we cannot find anything about the daily lives, but if we study the breaking news, we can find more and more valuable things in this book. On the other hand, the record of history is not uniform, and it might be has not large relationship with daily lives. In sum, might be to study the history's daily lives has value, but there is little record of history's daily lives. So if we want to get the value of history we need to enforce study the breaking news which has more record.

What's more, the history's daily lives also have the important value to the study, because we can use it to understand the life of human in the past. But there is a dilemma that we have not enough record to emerge the history's daily lives again. So if we want to overall the history, we can use the typical record of outstanding individual or breaking news to reflect the history's life. Even more, we can through the different time of human's history life to understand the culture that the development of our footmark. For example, the famous critic-Mark Twin-has a lot of critical article for the past society, then we study the Mark Twin and his article, and use it to reflect the darkness of that old society which Mark Twin lives. In short, the history's daily lives is the important part of history's study, if we want to understand it, we can use the record to reflect it.

Finally, there is a more valuable of history study, not only to study the outstanding individual or daily lives, but also to study the ancestors' experiment. The George Washington was said and I cite it-"If we want to develop, we must learn the history experiment". Only we study the ancestors' experiment, and understand it, even handle it, and then we can find out we will avoid and solve more and more problem that we meet today. For example, the SUN ZI BING FA in today, is still use in the business; the Compendium of Materia Medica in today, is still the classical opus in medicine; the Minamata Disease in today, is still warn the human environment's problem. So that, the truest value to study the history is let us to handle the ancestors' experiment, and to avoid and solve the dilemma in today.

In conclusion, we review that the condition and the situation about the history is to let understand the history. Moreover, the deeply value is that we can use the experiment of history to avoid or solve the problem that we meet in the modern time. And make the better life.
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my first ISSUE--103"The study of history has value only to the extent th #2 (permalink) Sat Sep 11, 2010 19:07 pm   my first ISSUE--103"The study of history has value only to the extent th
 

TOPIC: ISSUE103 - "The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."
WORDS: 642 TIME: 01:24:22 DATE: 2010/9/4 21:53:05
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Has the study history value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives? I am strongLY disagree with THIS STATEMENT. We study the history, because we want to review the condition and the situation about the history. Moreover, we can use the experiment of history to avoid or solve the problemS that we meet in theSE modern timeS.
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First of all, on the one hand, as we all know, the history of human that is the feudal society or slave society. What is more, in this a history society, the ruler has the power to decide what should be record and what should be not. In another word, the record of history that today we study has much more respect to describe the live of the ruler, the outstanding individual or the breaking news which ruler considered more valuable. However, if we only to study the history's daily lives, we cannot review the condition and the situation about the history. For instance, the most famous opus "SHI JI" in China, in this book that only describe the outstanding individual such as King of Zhou Wu, so that if we want to study the history through this book, we cannot find anything about the daily lives, but if we study the breaking news, we can find more and more valuable things in this book. On the other hand, the record of history is not uniform, and it might be has not large relationship with daily lives. In sum, might be to study the history's daily lives has value, but there is little record of history's daily lives. So if we want to get the value of history we need to enforce study the breaking news which has more record.

What's more, the history's daily lives also have the important value to the study, because we can use it to understand the life of human in the past. But there is a dilemma that we have not enough record to emerge the history's daily lives again. So if we want to overall the history, we can use the typical record of outstanding individual or breaking news to reflect the history's life. Even more, we can through the different time of human's history life to understand the culture that the development of our footmark. For example, the famous critic-Mark Twin-has a lot of critical article for the past society, then we study the Mark Twin and his article, and use it to reflect the darkness of that old society which Mark Twin lives. In short, the history's daily lives is the important part of history's study, if we want to understand it, we can use the record to reflect it.

Finally, there is a more valuable of history study, not only to study the outstanding individual or daily lives, but also to study the ancestors' experiment. The George Washington was said and I cite it-"If we want to develop, we must learn the history experiment". Only we study the ancestors' experiment, and understand it, even handle it, and then we can find out we will avoid and solve more and more problem that we meet today. For example, the SUN ZI BING FA in today, is still use in the business; the Compendium of Materia Medica in today, is still the classical opus in medicine; the Minamata Disease in today, is still warn the human environment's problem. So that, the truest value to study the history is let us to handle the ancestors' experiment, and to avoid and solve the dilemma in today.

In conclusion, we review that the condition and the situation about the history is to let understand the history. Moreover, the deeply value is that we can use the experiment of history to avoid or solve the problem that we meet in the modern time. And make the better life.
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Unfortunately your work here is only fair Vinnie. Only by doing more reading will you ever improve. Your sentence structure and content and very poor.

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