could you please correct this for me?

[Michael Ma]

1). I want to learn English well. By "well", I mean, at least, being really able to use it to express myself. I have tried a lot ways: reading novels, listening to English radio stations, watching English shows, and so on. But the problem is, there still seems to be a wall in my way. I have decided to add one new item to my learning list---I am taking a piece of paper wherever I go so that I can write down whatever it is that is pops into my mind. Then I will post it on the forum here for my friends to help correct for me. Poor them.

2). It's foggy,gloomy, wet and cool, typical for a fall rainy day.

Thanks

[Sam_I_Am]

I think Your idea is so good, Michael Ma!