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[Myside]

I am 28. I live in Addis Ababa, Ethiopia. I have come across this site while looking help for my TOEFL and SAT preparation. I could not point out my exact difficulties as I use more of common sense than actualy reasoning in my usage of english.
I developed english more through reading fictions books. I have problem with my grammer which I come to notice more when I take SAT preparation tests. Like simple noun-noun agreement, or other grammatical which i hope to post next time.
I need suggestion how to learn vocabuaries at ease, I can not afford to buy the things offered on this site. But i look forward to hear suggestions on how to tackle this issues. I hope i will post my TOEFL practice essays too. You may point out my spelling or grammer mistakes even in this site, i hope you will provide me with your suggestions

[Illegallife]

Hello dear!
It is my pleasure to made your acquintance. I highly appreciate your command of english, you are elloquent and expressive, and made me curious to ask you to post your essays in this forum. I cannot wait reading your essays.
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Put All Excuses Aside And Remember; YOU ARE CAPABLE.

[Myside]

Topic “when people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success’ Agree or disagree type of question
We live in world where we ought to work hard to reach our goals; these varies among individuals. But the final goal is to be successful in what we are looking to achieve. From my experience as student and from what I see from the life of people that I come across in every day life, success is comes from hard work, rather than luck.
First I have spent half of my life at school and realized that the scores, which evaluate my success or participation at class comes as result of my study at home. Some of my peers has been competitive as I am, in class. And the other part of the group were not competitive. For example, there was my class mate who used to seat beside me, and who usually comes with home works undone or half finished. H was more carless and he is not participant at class too. He always hoped to get some answers from me. But in our final exams we were obliged to take one chair for one student and he flunk almost all subjects. You may point out, if I made him lazy or not. But the fact is he has not done any hard work to succeed at class.
In relation to hard work; I live in predominantly agriculture country. Which means most of the population are dependent from the agriculture food they produce. They are expected to prepare the land, dig water wale, use appropriate techonology , like fertilizer and more. From the land preparation to harvesting it takes whole lot of energy and determination. For a person, farmer, who is not willing to do these steps more would end up producing nothing or less than those who have prepared beforehand.
As I come from religious family and country. I was thought that GOD send us to earth so that we should live with our sweats or hard work. For the parents who are not doing well to meet their daily needs would not succeed in fulfilling their family needs.
Generally, luck has nothing to do with success from my experience. Everyone work what he or she can do best and eat from the fruits of the work he or she invested in the first place. Zero investment would bring zero income.

[Myside]

Topic “universities should give the same amount of money to their student’s sports activities as they give to their university libraries” agree or disagree type of question
Universities as institution; it contains different facilities that are meant to satisfy the university members. These facilities are supported by the university. Most argue that the support or money provided by the universities for sport activities should be the same as the money they give to their libraries. It also my believe that equal attention should be given to both, that is liberaries and sporting activities.
First, liberaries are places one could find books or other printed or non printed materials to read. In this facility one expected to get academic or leisure from reading those materials provided by the center. It would be unwise to say that this things only fulfill the student needs. If one enjoys his or her reading relating it with sporting activity it would make that person more relax from stress and other problems. It is also scientifically advised that working out would give more relaxation physically and mentally. Thus we need to give attention for the sport activities as we do for the liberaries.
Secondly, in relation to the about statement. There is a relation between mental readiness to read and the sporiting activities we perform each day. For example, when I was a freshman in college, we used to have sporting class with passing or failing marks. Most of us were willing to go in to activity for the sake of getting the grades. But in my today’s knowledge I could say that I have gained a lot by one credit hour we had each week to practice on the field with sporting activities. It made me more to go out from the academic activities I have involved myself and enjoy the fun with colleagues. Thus, I could say the attention or money provided for the teachers or training materials or the gym would worth more when it is diversified and caught the attention of the students.
Finally, I could say people have different interest to pursuit. This could mean majoring in physical education or realting fields. As we are investing more money on liberaries providing updated books or other materials. It is also necessary to make same investment on sports so that the individuals who are pursuing to become modern athelete or coaches would get the modern education. It also give the rest of the schooling community to practice diversified sporting activities and keep their health in safer ground.
Generally, giving same amount of money to students sporting activities and university liberaries would go along in creating students who are physically and mentally fit to for challenging world the face.
P.S please read and give me your suggestion. Also when you take TOEFL iBT are you allowed to used back space, to delete words. Sound silly but am not familiar with it. Also are you allowed to read the listening part or the reading part coming back after starting to do the question? Please need your response