 #1 (permalink) Mon Sep 20, 2010 18:40 pm TOEFL essay, read and give me your suggestion |
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Topic “universities should give the same amount of money to their student’s sports activities as they give to their university libraries” agree or disagree type of question
Universities as institution; it contains different facilities that are meant to satisfy the university members. These facilities are supported by the university. Most argue that the support or money provided by the universities for sport activities should be the same as the money they give to their libraries. It also my believe that equal attention should be given to both, that is liberaries and sporting activities.
First, liberaries are places one could find books or other printed or non printed materials to read. In this facility one expected to get academic or leisure from reading those materials provided by the center. It would be unwise to say that this things only fulfill the student needs. If one enjoys his or her reading relating it with sporting activity it would make that person more relax from stress and other problems. It is also scientifically advised that working out would give more relaxation physically and mentally. Thus we need to give attention for the sport activities as we do for the liberaries.
Secondly, in relation to the about statement. There is a relation between mental readiness to read and the sporiting activities we perform each day. For example, when I was a freshman in college, we used to have sporting class with passing or failing marks. Most of us were willing to go in to activity for the sake of getting the grades. But in my today’s knowledge I could say that I have gained a lot by one credit hour we had each week to practice on the field with sporting activities. It made me more to go out from the academic activities I have involved myself and enjoy the fun with colleagues. Thus, I could say the attention or money provided for the teachers or training materials or the gym would worth more when it is diversified and caught the attention of the students.
Finally, I could say people have different interest to pursuit. This could mean majoring in physical education or realting fields. As we are investing more money on liberaries providing updated books or other materials. It is also necessary to make same investment on sports so that the individuals who are pursuing to become modern athelete or coaches would get the modern education. It also give the rest of the schooling community to practice diversified sporting activities and keep their health in safer ground.
Generally, giving same amount of money to students sporting activities and university liberaries would go along in creating students who are physically and mentally fit to for challenging world the face.
P.S please read and give me your suggestion. Also when you take TOEFL iBT are you allowed to used back space, to delete words. Sound silly but am not familiar with it. Also are you allowed to read the listening part or the reading part coming back after starting to do the question? Please need your response |
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