qualities of a good neighbor

[Alican]

From the very beginning of civilization, humankind need always to live in a community , and to interact with other people. This instinctive behaviour of humans is resulted in establishment of social communities. The most important essence of this socialization process is notion of neighborhood. Hence, our neighbors play very significant role in our daily lives and from my personal perspective, they should have some fundemental qualities such as, friendship, respect, and helpfullness. Lets focus on these features as follows.

The first quality that a good neighbor should have is being friendly. In particular, we are increasingly pressured during our daily lives by work stress, traffic jam, and so on. After such a overwhelming day, we get home, in order to relieve and free from stress. An additional disturbance caused by our neighbor may make our life unbearable. Therefore, we should behave to our neighbors in friendly manner, and welcome to our neighborhood, since once for all they are close to you, your family, and your property.

The another characteristic of good neighbor is respect. We ought to obey some main rules of communal living in order to establish a peaceful environmnet. By the way of illustration, we should not invade our neighbors' living space, pay attention to not make noise after certain time in the evening, protect properties of our neigbours as carefully as possible, and so forth, because creating mutual respect amongst neighbors is one of the most vital step to live in a harmony.

At last but not least, as every segment of life being helpful is also very crucial in our relationship with our neighbours. At any moment we can encounter at home some difficulties, or even worse we may have injurious accidents. For instance, we have not a car and we may become suddenly sick or we are wounded seriously in the middle of night at home. A helpful neighbor ,who posses a car , drive us to a hospital and safe our lives. Presence of a helpful neighbour provide us to live more safely.

To bearing all the above mentioned, in order to spend a welfare and happy time at home, we need neigbors who should approach toward us and our living space in resepctful, friendly and helpful manner.

TOEFL listening discussions: What is the main weakness of the student's essay?

[Kitosdad]

[Alican]

Thanks for correction and your advices are very precious for me.I will keep them in my mind and focus on reading more. On the other hand, I want to write a esssay once a day.
Have a nice day

[Kitosdad]

Writing only once a day is a very good idea. It leaves you time to do more reading.Believe me when I say that reading is your quickest way to improving, but you must review each sentence and note its structure.
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